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cover <<<<<<<<<< first pg: fav.me/d4w2m7r >>>>>>>>>>>>> next: pg 99: fav.me/d6q3d84or if you'd rather jump right into the most recent pages, quick catch up summaries here with most relevant plot elements included in concise wording
Arc 1 pgs 1-18 fav.me/d5coa2x
Arc 2 pgs 19-43 fav.me/d5pt5sv
Arc 3 pt 1 pgs 44-70 fav.me/d61z5mr
Arc 3 pt 1 pgs 71-??: fav.me/d6k9kyt
folder with all pages here: volbeatfiro.deviantart.com/galβ¦
plot refresher of pages 1-50 with character by character analysis: fav.me/d6j0kvd
back to more serious, and a fennel centric page.fun fun
updating on a lot of fennel plot points here that have been building up, including...
Deoxys' capture, meteorites from Clay, capture of Elesa, Capture of Captain Coffee, the Abra Teleport Generator, and Alisa
she's checking them off her to do list, just as I'm refreshing you guys on all these points in this page. also hooray Fennel for being organized and making a to do list, YOU GO GIRL!!
reference to Q-bert with the arcade machine 3.bp.blogspot.com/-03vWQUPcBEQβ¦
joltik electric shocking glove because why not? and it damages Alisa's pride even more to go through such agony from just a little bug (though it is enhancing an electric glove and isn't just the joltik's power, that's beside the point)
so yup, Have some Fennel Alisa interaction, where Fennel offers her kindness by engraving an important lesson in humility upon Alisa
I always have fun writing Fennel, nothing like very morbid and harsh concepts made into fun filled analogys, first rc toy cars, then arcade games? what will that dictator come up with next XD?
so yeah, just more characterization for our antagonist lady friend Fennel
enjoy
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ZuesKillerProduction [2013-12-15 15:28:16 +0000 UTC]
Eric=champion of umbrellas
Fennel=evil dictator
Who will win?
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OddPenguin In reply to ZuesKillerProduction [2013-12-16 02:20:06 +0000 UTC]
DUN DUN DUNNN!!
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OddPenguin In reply to leafeonsnivy [2013-10-08 02:45:25 +0000 UTC]
ah thanks, little updates and changes, but nothing too drastics
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NikkyDash [2013-10-07 15:46:26 +0000 UTC]
Omg that looks so painful. I was really just cringed that whole time through it.
>restrains self from going into how much brain damage Alisa probably has now
Technically she could have just used the Joltik for bug-type damage, but this was much more shocking -shotshotshot- to the audience.
"Kindly fall into despair already" I loved that line. It's great how frustrating Elisa is to Fennel that she's at the point of just hanging up on her whenever Elisa starts talking.
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OddPenguin In reply to NikkyDash [2013-10-07 17:26:28 +0000 UTC]
painful? why, it should be considered a blessing, now this important lesson can be traumatized into your brain, it's all to help you become a better person. and you'll see in time
yeah, having a little bug bite her wouldn't have the same impact, unless Alisa got tossed into a pit of joltik who bug bite swarmed her, but we want her alive not eaten XD
ah thanks, it shows a combination of both Fennel trying to maintain her calm observant smiley nature with the kindly, but it also shows frustration and losing patience on her behalf. Hope Vs Despair, shine through and save the world with the power of hope Elesa!Β As long as we have hope... We will never give inο»Ώ to despair!!
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NikkyDash In reply to OddPenguin [2013-10-08 16:51:44 +0000 UTC]
I feel like I'm being conditioned. And I kind of like it. ._.
I think getting eaten alive would have been a great form of torture to teach her a lesson. Bite marks in her leaves? Yes please.
Goddamn peasantry trying to make a fool out of our beloved dictator with their shining hope and rejection of despair and the like. >.>
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OddPenguin In reply to NikkyDash [2013-10-10 16:40:17 +0000 UTC]
YES!
heh, it'd be a bit harder to use due to situations later on, but yes leaf bites would have been cool.
they sure have nerve, Β their job is but to serve, nothing more
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NikkyDash In reply to OddPenguin [2013-10-10 17:09:44 +0000 UTC]
Leaf bites would have been really cool to add to her design, it would take away some of that elegance that she likes to achieve though.
Fucking peasants omg just get in the corn fields where you belong.
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OddPenguin In reply to NikkyDash [2013-10-11 23:51:13 +0000 UTC]
for sure, electric won due to how it'll be used in the future Β + more damaging to your pride when you're beat up by a type you RESIST.
Praise the Fennel AMEN!!!
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OddPenguin In reply to PitchBlackEspresso [2013-10-07 13:15:31 +0000 UTC]
sympathy for anyone in such a situation is natural
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kitfox-crimson [2013-10-07 04:07:47 +0000 UTC]
wow so much going on D:
and yeah Fennel is pretty damn crazy XD
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OddPenguin In reply to kitfox-crimson [2013-10-07 04:10:22 +0000 UTC]
the fact that I'm at 98 tall pages and am still only about half way to the league should be testimony of how much is going on, so much plot and other things. This page was mostly just refresher on a lot of the fennel based plot elements established earlier and moving them forward.
heh, you haven't seen anything yet XD
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kitfox-crimson In reply to OddPenguin [2013-10-07 04:58:55 +0000 UTC]
I'm a-quiver with anticipation ^^
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OddPenguin In reply to kitfox-crimson [2013-10-07 13:17:47 +0000 UTC]
rev up those quivers!
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dalejandre1 [2013-10-07 03:06:54 +0000 UTC]
Dang...Fennel that cute face you have is only a mask of your true personality!(Also around the end is that supposed to be "being bis sister or big?)
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OddPenguin In reply to dalejandre1 [2013-10-07 03:09:57 +0000 UTC]
dang nabbit, another typo. to the typing fixing mobile.
and indeed, people hide under many superficial facets and personas.
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Ronnie-Absol [2013-10-07 00:20:03 +0000 UTC]
Sadistic people scare me. Fennel now scares me
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OddPenguin In reply to Ronnie-Absol [2013-10-07 00:35:08 +0000 UTC]
that's reasonable logic
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Ronnie-Absol In reply to OddPenguin [2013-10-09 02:59:27 +0000 UTC]
It feels odd being logical~
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Khrysteen [2013-10-06 23:49:42 +0000 UTC]
HNNNG THERE IS NOTHING ON THIS PAGE THAT IS HAPPY NOTHING AT ALL--
No wait, Eric is continuing on his adventure, all his well.
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OddPenguin In reply to Khrysteen [2013-10-07 00:35:54 +0000 UTC]
nothing happy on this page...but look how much Fennel is smiling, surely something joyous must be occuring.
and yes, some is well thanks to Eric's last minute light hearted tone save for the page
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ViziVoir [2013-10-06 22:42:58 +0000 UTC]
am I the only one still wondering... WHERE THE HECK IS N
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OddPenguin In reply to ViziVoir [2013-10-06 23:24:43 +0000 UTC]
no you aren't, there's a lot of WHERE IS so and so and such and such since there are SO many different plot points going on. this elesa and deoxys kidnapping was last shown page 50, it's what? 98 now.Β
Point being, I have a ton going on in the plot, so it takes a while to get to things. but if you remember the next location in game you should know N is upcoming soon.
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ViziVoir In reply to OddPenguin [2013-10-07 00:08:24 +0000 UTC]
I know, i know... but I haven't seen any speculation lately ._.
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OddPenguin In reply to ViziVoir [2013-10-07 00:37:10 +0000 UTC]
heh, like nikkydash has noted, there's so much going on it's easy to forget a detail that'll come back up later on, so it's like a constant surprise when these tie ins occur later on
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ViziVoir In reply to OddPenguin [2013-10-07 00:54:02 +0000 UTC]
The best kind of storyline - an incredibly detailed, well-polished one. Very very nice.
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Lion-Oh-Day [2013-10-06 20:45:55 +0000 UTC]
She's a real tough cookie with a long history. Of breaking little hearts like the one in me!
But that's okay!
Lets get to it!
Put up your dukes and lets get down to it!
Hit me with your best shock!
Hit me with your best shock!
Hit me with your best shock!
FIiiire awwwwaaaayyyyyy!!!
(Gotta fight back how cruel that torture was :\ )
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OddPenguin In reply to Lion-Oh-Day [2013-10-06 23:33:13 +0000 UTC]
I just knew deep down this was gonna be pretty intense and a bit much for some and people were going to reply with electric related puns. I originally was going to put something stating "felt this page was too harsh? comment with an electric pun", but I thought then I'd end up getting all the same electric puns of "that was SHOCKING " so I left it out.
(pfft, my obsession of dangan ronpa at the moment is probably partially to blame for the degree of cruelty, it's rubbing off a bit into my writing. if you don't mind spoilers to this series I'll link you some examples of just how intense this is)
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Lion-Oh-Day In reply to OddPenguin [2013-10-07 00:06:55 +0000 UTC]
Thankfully you're style for this comic helps decrease the cruelty.
( Sure Don't mind at all)
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OddPenguin In reply to Lion-Oh-Day [2013-10-07 00:31:19 +0000 UTC]
ah good to know, it's nice how more cartoony styles help you get away with more darker subjects, a lesson american classic cartoons know well
and alrighty, here's some of the executions to give you an idea. Β www.youtube.com/watch?v=FHJbAVβ¦ www.youtube.com/watch?v=GoUR6-β¦ www.youtube.com/watch?v=W_TUu1β¦
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Lion-Oh-Day In reply to OddPenguin [2013-10-07 04:37:37 +0000 UTC]
O.OΒ What did i just watch....
What i can piece together is its a cast of characters and people are (Voted out? of the show?) and that is done by executions.? Is that anywhere close to it?
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OddPenguin In reply to Lion-Oh-Day [2013-10-07 04:42:48 +0000 UTC]
basically the hunger games meets ace attorney. every time there's a murder, you have to figure out who did it. if you figure out who did it, they and only they die, if you don't figure it out, the murderer graduates the school and everyone else get's killed. Β so fairly close.
only reason I'm bringing it up is because in comparison to Monobear's tortures, this is timid XD
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Lion-Oh-Day In reply to OddPenguin [2013-10-07 04:51:24 +0000 UTC]
Right okay so it a video game. ( looked some youtube videos pretty weird intresting but weird XD )
X) The middle one wasn't that bad just butter! The other ones :I pretty intense.
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OddPenguin In reply to Lion-Oh-Day [2013-10-07 04:56:18 +0000 UTC]
there's an anime too I haven't checked out yet.
it's a video game but not translated yet, I've been reading it on a LP online here like a novel with all the screenshotsΒ lparchive.org/Dangan-Ronpa/Updβ¦
yeah, wasn't too bad, though the concept of making someone's fat into butter than eating pancakes with said butter on top is a bit intense in concept. that detention one really freaked me out when I first saw it, just that sound at the end
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Lion-Oh-Day In reply to OddPenguin [2013-10-07 05:05:57 +0000 UTC]
www.youtube.com/watch?v=zxIkJc⦠(Wait this isn't it?)
I just find it to over the top Along with him basically being killed by driving to fast in a motorcycle ball. Its like the Flash taken to insane levels.
Just the fact you don't know when it coming XD Just makes yah wence.
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OddPenguin In reply to Lion-Oh-Day [2013-10-07 05:13:03 +0000 UTC]
that's an unofficial translation, this series has a pretty dedicated fanbase far as I've seen. the official site of the game shows it won't even be out until early 2014 in US officially nisamerica.com/games/danganron⦠. if you watch that video enough, you'll realize all the voice acting is still in japanese, only all the text has been translated.
pfft, that's true about the bike one, not all of them have the same impact.
yeah, and the facial reacting to it.
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Lion-Oh-Day In reply to OddPenguin [2013-10-07 05:16:58 +0000 UTC]
Oh yeah that's true it is in Japanese. It must be a long game the ending is like 3 hours long O.O Dear lord.
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OddPenguin In reply to Lion-Oh-Day [2013-10-07 05:19:40 +0000 UTC]
it's not that long, it's like an ace attorney game, that ending is the last trial. there's 6 trials total and 6 periods of investigation to gather up evidence before. that end was the last trial in it's entirety
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Lion-Oh-Day In reply to OddPenguin [2013-10-07 05:23:29 +0000 UTC]
Never played an Ace Attorney game either XD
Yeah guess its not that long The mass effect 2 ending was about 3 hours as well.
( Goodness that ME2 ending was amazing easily my favorite ending to a videogame)
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OddPenguin In reply to Lion-Oh-Day [2013-10-07 05:55:01 +0000 UTC]
hmm, it's hard to compare it to much else, the game mechanics aren't like much else.
indeed, and oh gosh, I saw a 3 and thought you said 3 had your favorite ending ever...pfft, ME 3 ending
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Lion-Oh-Day In reply to OddPenguin [2013-10-07 13:14:28 +0000 UTC]
The sad thing is ME 3 was great up intill that point. BUT then it went to complete and utter poo!
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