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**DOWNLOAD FOR FULL SIZE**Reveal in my greatness!!! *koff* >>; No, seriously, can you believe I have another page ALREADY!?!?! Huh... I'm nuts! Wee!! hehe.
Okay, so the black and white made it go quicker. The actual hardest more tedious part is getting the layout down. Once I put in the 3 bottom panels of the first page there, it came together better... lol. I really like the layouts here.
Yay me!I know the black and white isn't completely acurate to their colors- as Themos and Shi would be a lot darker grey would it be accurately done in b/w. But, guess what? I don't care!!! lol.
The next page will be colored- as it involves Ethan and, it needs to be. The next part I had originally planned to animate, but I don't know Flash enough and I have no time to spend, plus it would take forever and a day to animate. So yes- anyways... enjoy this as is!
No crits plz.
More to come soon.
Previous pages:
Page 1
Page 2
Page 3
Part 4 (literature)
Part 5 (literature)
Page 6
Page 7
Page 8
Page 9 & 10
Page 11
Page 12
Page 13
Fhaux ©
Shi ©
Jenna ©
& (Themos is a char of a friend of mine that is no longer online).
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Comments: 34
I am enjoying this story very much! I'm eager to read more.
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I'm sorta online.... just... not on the same line as you at the same time O_O;;
but ooooooooh
ahhhhhhh
and nuuu not his head!!! but it's not his face, so... xD
Couldn't quite read the text, my screen is too small 
awesome job, totally envious of your drawing skill still
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lol. When /are/ you online? Not sure, but I'm like, on all the time. xD Well, except early morning. lol.
I'd like to get back into contact with you. I'm sad we've lost touch.
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cant express how much i admire your ability to professionally structure layouts and draw your characters
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Wow great lyaout. I'm in love with the blonds pose in the left second from top pic.
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Yay! 2 pages of goodness in one! lol. Really terrific job with the colouring. Love the story line - really gets the questions flowing! Can't wait till the next page!
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theres so many pretty people on these pages *sighs*
It may be bad..but I really like Themos...
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well this was unexpected. xD
i love everything about it to be honest. EVERYTHING.
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ha ha, I know... I love surprising people like that. muahah. hehe. Thanks babe!!
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Another load of emotional action! I admire the progress, Julie. ^_^
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Oh man I totally love Shi in this one...she's just like...full of expressions and WTF!?! or something.
Another wonderful comic and these are just exquisite!
I'm excited to see Ethy-babe again!
I love how much of a badass Jenna is!
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DANG! you're quick today!
and it's WORTH it! wow!
Haste make waste?
BULLSHIT
this is gorgeous and can't wait for the next!
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I think the black and white looks beautiful here! : D
And eeee, I can't wait for the next one. I miss Ethan in these. 8)
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Whoot. Not just one page... but TWO! <3
I got just as confused as Jude did the first time I read it, but realized, DURR two pages not one large one. So I sat back, and used my brain! Walla.
I actually like the black and white even if the two characters should be different colors, WHO CARES!, but yes. One thing I like the most is the way you place the emotions all in the eyes. It's so well done. Can't wait for page 16. (Btw your missing the link to page 13 on your description)
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I love eyes... oh gosh do I love eyes. lol. xD;; Thanks, glad I could convey the emotion.
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Thankee. 
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This is amaaaaaazing! Its kinda difficult for me to understand though... is it read all the way across or like, two pages in one? I tried reading it over like, twice in the different ways but I still kinda got confused =x
but everyone looks lovely and the plot thickens...! woooo. I love how you can draw faces from like, every view and emotion. Its soooo cool, I hope I improve to be able to do that *_*
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It reads like two pages of a comic book would- split down the middle. Guess it's harder to tell with the black and white and no obvious divider, but I can put a line in between to make it seperate better (it's a back line currently) but yeah. It's two pages, seperate, not to be read from one end to the other, but one page from top to bottom left to right and then the second page the same. But yeah.
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mmmkay ^^ Ill reread it again <3
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I put a white line inbetween the pages and did some highlight stuff, so it should look better now. I hope. xD;;
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Yeah. I reread it and got it. I think the thing that was throwing me off was the kind of... rushed and random leaving Jenna on the second page. It made me think maybe it went... some other way idk XD Im just kinda, slow when it comes to comics. Haha.
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Wow Jules you're on a roll! these two pages look awsome i love how badass you make Jenna
i also really like how you draw Themos' hair. not an easy style to draw thats for sure. i love the high contrast look for these comics ^_^
i have one slight little crit and that is that Jenna's hips are a bit boyish. she has some curves to her hips and in those pants she needs them XD its not a big prob tho.
These look awsome, keep up the good work!
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There, I edited it a bit- so her hips aren't so straight.... xD I think/hope it looks better. lol. Hips are a pain sometimes...
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oh i didnt mean that you had to change it XD im a terrible person!
it looks great tho, i think you definatly succeeded on the hips this time
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I know, and no you're not 
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I'm fixing her hips, cuz now they're bugging me! lol. I think one of the issues I had was not wanting her thighs to look too big... lol. Working on it though. *nod*
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lol, yeah, her hips were giving me issues... I was like... GAH! So I gave up. xD;; Sorry. >>;; I might go back later and fix.
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