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Published: 2017-10-22 13:43:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 1296; Favourites: 62; Downloads: 0
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| Archive | First PageSiblings Wither and Ruin leave their island of warriors and descend to The Eye, where all dragonkind can be found. One thinks they'll finally live for themselves. The other is afraid of those they left behind. After all, it's only a matter of time until their old comrades come for them.
Will the two stay free with the help of their new friends? Or will they fall to a threat greater than they've ever imagined?
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I FINALLY MADE IT HERE IN MY INBOX
I really like this cover! You did such a great job with the stylized comic book shading, and the lighting is dramatic and fresh looking!
Wither's expression really makes one wonder what comes next. The expression is wonderfully done, ASWELL AS THE PERSPECTIVE! UNDERJAW ANGLES KILLS ME EVERY TIME, but for some reason they're so appropriate for so many situations and I can't avoid them.
I also really like the logo for the comic!! My only concern is that it seems to disappear a little bit among the cover artwork?? But this might be intentional. It is not necessarily a problem, because I did notice the logo after a while along with those nice cloud embellishments, but if you want the logo to be even more clear and prominent then maybe some extra contrast could help it, like a bigger black outline, and perhaps reducing the contrast in the gradient overlay in the letters. I'm by no means knowledgeable when it comes to comic book covers and the like though, so I don't know how to help, or if this needs any help in the first place?? Don't even know if you want feedback on this, so you have my biggest apologies if so >.< I just don't want that gorgeous logo you made disappearing??
I'm so excited to see you make this comic! I can imagine it going to be really challenging, but that you will learn so much doing it! Take the time you need, don't stress, do your best, and then you'll have a piece of work you will be incredibly proud of down the line.
SENDING ALL MY GOOD ENERGY AND ENCOURAGEMENT!
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I’m glad you made it! THANK YOU!
They kill me too. Sometimes I do the basic shapes and then draw curved lines along where the jaw should be so I can see the 3D-ness?? I know you do 3D sculpting, so I’m sure that can help too!
That’s a good idea, actually! I think I’ll try that and see how that works.
It already is challenging XD But I’m sticking through it because I’m not taking this story down for a third time.
Thank you for that energy, I’ll need it
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HSJKFSKLJ THIS LOOKS GREAT??? LOOK AT THAT FIRE AND LIGHTING?
Are you only uploading this on DeviantArt? Or are you going to consider uploading it on Webtoon or Tapas too>
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Maybe Webtoons when I make so many pages.
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This looks amazing already! (I love the lighting in this, it's so cool!)
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