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Published: 2004-11-27 18:56:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 4496; Favourites: 56; Downloads: 706
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Description Underneath the darkened sky
All along the crooked way
The same story once again
Of sorrow and of pain
One fool in a dream
One black-hearted queen
A tale of unrequited love
That's written in tears, written in blood
She smiles, he cries
He begs, but she denies
As tonight becomes tomorrow
All joy will turn to sorrow

This is a tale of a succubus
A tale of love, pain and lust
And death, and death!

Ashes to ashes, dust to dust
Where there's love, there is lust
Where there's a boy to give his heart
There's a woman to tear it apart
Where there's giving, there's taking
There's faking, and there's breaking
Where there's trust deceit's right there
The dream becomes the nightmare!

To despair she'll take him
A shadow she'll make him
Before hi, the open grave
On his wrist, the razor blade
Young man, hang your head and cry
It's time to suffer, time to die
Abandon you the dreams of youth
Abandon love, hope and truth!

She will crush you, she'll excite you
She'll destroy you, she'll ignite you
She'll take you to a world of darkness
And eath, and death!

On a night of dread and wonder
Hear her heartbeat turn to thunder
Now's the time for soul surrender
And death, and death!

Inkubus Sukkubus - All Along The Crooked Way
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Comments: 35

I-Warner [2009-06-02 07:54:51 +0000 UTC]

Purtee. Great work.

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Dviperman [2005-03-01 14:42:19 +0000 UTC]

ANother excellent piece.

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mystiphied [2005-03-01 10:30:48 +0000 UTC]

i think the glasses really add a nice touch.

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Latexxx [2005-03-01 09:20:40 +0000 UTC]

Damneth girl, another great piece. Great outfit, and great set pieces. Again your lighting is perfect. Your producing some fine work of late.



Latexxx

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Dadward [2005-03-01 09:03:31 +0000 UTC]

Nice photo.

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spread [2005-03-01 06:52:04 +0000 UTC]

looks like catwoman on her playground

you are really talented!
you should take some courses in photography and maybe make more out of you hobby!

greetings

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scribularhate [2005-03-01 02:50:09 +0000 UTC]

*drools* wow.. love the shot, the angle, the outfit, the vivid red... everything looks good in this shot. Im very impressed.

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theblackline [2005-03-01 01:42:51 +0000 UTC]

... okay i know you 16 .. but how in all the world do you manage to make your self look like a 20-mid 20's year old model is still away from me

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OfficialSerenaStar In reply to theblackline [2005-03-01 02:11:08 +0000 UTC]

-shrugs-? lol I dunno x_x

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theblackline In reply to OfficialSerenaStar [2005-03-04 20:34:23 +0000 UTC]

you must be using m...A......g....I......c or it is just that your that beautiful or both ... id go with both

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greenmachine [2005-02-28 22:34:17 +0000 UTC]

excellent composition....maybe the capabilities of the camera have let it down some but so what

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OfficialSerenaStar In reply to greenmachine [2005-03-01 00:05:56 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, im so happy I have a new camera now

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Ryukotesu [2005-02-03 01:30:52 +0000 UTC]

What the Fuck!!!! DOUBLE DOSE!!!Hott Poem!!HOt PIC!!!It's Like the Big MAc...WITH THE CHEESE!!+Fav

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Ciara06 [2005-01-31 15:10:31 +0000 UTC]

Wow. This picture is awesome. Another great job.

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KassandraLeigh [2005-01-25 03:33:34 +0000 UTC]

yah i *KNOW* i faved this already.it just needs to be done agian lol

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OfficialSerenaStar In reply to KassandraLeigh [2005-01-25 05:29:43 +0000 UTC]

you never faved it on Da hehe. Just myspace . Thanks..I just wish it wasnt as blurry.

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KassandraLeigh In reply to OfficialSerenaStar [2005-01-25 15:21:54 +0000 UTC]

You probly could clear it up with photoshop if u dont mind editing.

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OfficialSerenaStar In reply to KassandraLeigh [2005-01-25 20:02:54 +0000 UTC]

Meh i tried that once...made it a lil grainy

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edf [2005-01-23 15:04:33 +0000 UTC]

This picture is handled sonicely. The redish tone for th epic really gives it the right mood. The pose, clothes and such really fit the title and all. This is extremely nicely done! I really like the highlights on the pants as well. I actually dont know what else to really say, i mean, it would all just be a bunch of 'oh i like that and i like this'

Very nicely done.

+fav

edf

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Innuendo-media [2005-01-23 14:33:54 +0000 UTC]

Wow i love the colours in this image and the lighting works well with it. Its a very intersting idea aswell and definately boasts alot of thought and imagination. You have some creative ideas. Keep it up!

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XmishimaX [2004-12-08 02:15:32 +0000 UTC]

Super cool!
Lovely shine!

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BeautifullyChaotic [2004-12-05 14:00:52 +0000 UTC]

This is quite an amazing picture...

I can't help but wonder... are you a true red head -
And if not... Then you must tell me what colour you're using to dye your hair!

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OfficialSerenaStar In reply to BeautifullyChaotic [2004-12-05 14:03:50 +0000 UTC]

I used to have gold hair.. blonde with very red highlights...as i got older it began to fade though.. I should post some of the pictures of myself when I was younger. I was adorable But yeah, um the
color I use is a mix and a lot of letting it fade to a specific way then dying it a specific color, waiting a month then dying it again. Most of the people around here think im a natural red head I find it amusing.

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BeautifullyChaotic In reply to OfficialSerenaStar [2004-12-05 14:07:45 +0000 UTC]

Thats cause you got a really good result with the colour.
I've tried going as red-head twice but the colour didn't really work with my dark, brown hair...
I just keep trying... u'know, until I'll find the right way.
I really love red-heads. Quite obsessed with them

I really liked you gallery.

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OfficialSerenaStar In reply to BeautifullyChaotic [2004-12-05 14:09:49 +0000 UTC]

thank you much ^^ and dont worry about that, It took me a lot time to get my hair where I wanted it too cause it was blonde then i dyed it auburn so it was dark... was hard to get it back to red..what you do is dye it a color lighter than the red you want to startand keep using it till its light then use the red you want.. that way you dont damage your hair by bleaching it.. It just takes a while to get where you want...at least thats what I do

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BeautifullyChaotic In reply to OfficialSerenaStar [2004-12-05 14:14:03 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the tip. I'll try that...

Well I'll have to start it next month, cause I dyed my hair blooded-red today.
It looks really, really good. Kind of red-head, just a little darker.

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skidms9 [2004-12-04 16:44:33 +0000 UTC]

If I could say there was anything wrong here I would, but I just can't, and I've tried.

1'st it was the loss of the right leg into the background, but it's brought right back out by the reflection on the knee...
2'nd it was going to be the loss of sharpness in and around the red areas of the image, but again, this only excentuates the centrepiece of the image...

I think you've shown once and for all that there truly is a difference between looking and SEEING

Absolutley Beautiful...

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OfficialSerenaStar In reply to skidms9 [2004-12-04 16:53:36 +0000 UTC]

Aww thank you! I think thats the best comment
i've gotten for a longgg time o.o; Thank you so much

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skidms9 In reply to OfficialSerenaStar [2004-12-04 17:02:55 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome... Your entire gallery is very impressive, and 16??? Never would've thought...

That image just stood out in a big way though... Nice one

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OfficialSerenaStar In reply to skidms9 [2004-12-04 17:29:39 +0000 UTC]

I'm not that good yet. I haven't taken any classes or anything and I just started really getting into photography last december. I love critic because I hope to become an even better photographer within this next year ^_^ Its hard though because I want to take landscape images but my camera blurrs everything together, specially the sky. There was this mountain I saw on vacation and the mist rising off it was beautiful but my camera blurred everything so you couldnt see the mist at all...Also, its a rare occasion my friends let me take pictures of them so I use myself ... meaning i can't get the angles and such I really want..

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skidms9 In reply to OfficialSerenaStar [2004-12-04 18:06:20 +0000 UTC]

Well, you're off to a good start, especially in just 12 months. Having the right camera's gonna help loads though, especially if your old one isn't upto the job. It's kind of annoying when you know you've taken a good shot and it just doesn't look right when its up on the screen. Good luck with everything you shoot in the future though, especially if it's those elusive friends pictures.

If it's ok, I'll look in from time to time, it would be nice to see how you progress...

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OfficialSerenaStar In reply to skidms9 [2004-12-04 18:20:47 +0000 UTC]

I would love that ^_^ Right now i'm using a 2.1 mega pixel hp camera..but my parents/grandparents are all pitching in and getting me a good camera this christmas Maybe then i'll be able to talk my friends into letting me take pictures

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skidms9 In reply to OfficialSerenaStar [2004-12-04 19:00:25 +0000 UTC]

Cool... A nice Fuji S5500 should be just about right. Anybody would want to pose in front of that lil' thing. Guess you'll just have to wait and see though...

Anyway, good luck with it all and I'll catch up with you again real soon...

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godisvoid [2004-11-27 23:25:13 +0000 UTC]

speechless as well... and i'm not usually..

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deftonius [2004-11-27 20:17:07 +0000 UTC]



...I can't really say much, You're just too good...

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