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Published: 2004-03-12 22:09:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 75; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 57
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Description "Psych-les"

Slowly the heart begins to beat
Some nights I never sleep
Somedays I feel weak
And this happens every week

Talk to myself to remind me I'm ok
Answer myself in response to myself
And the day's up in handcuffs
But I'm alive

Skin feels tender and pale
Looks begin to scale
Go over it like a forgotten tale
Oh I know this is a forbidden hell

Cycle through this one more time
Hope I don't lose my mind
Tell myself it will be ok
Just as long I have something to say

Think of me when I am gone
Too late, I already am
And God sometimes wants to be my friend
Like an old friend I haven't seen in years
We sit down and drink a few beers
Before reality hits me in the face
Reminds me of the taste of failure
Why was I brought here?
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Comments: 8

ohgrbite [2004-03-16 02:16:57 +0000 UTC]

Well s5f, that's a new twist on it I guess. But now that I think about it.. it does have an odd Punk-kinda flavor to it. Who knows. Maybe I'll start another crappy band up one day and use it heh.

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southern5footer In reply to ohgrbite [2004-03-16 18:51:20 +0000 UTC]

That could be fun! If i knew how to play anything I would join... but i dont.... So I will just be a groupie

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southern5footer [2004-03-16 00:28:35 +0000 UTC]

I really like this. I can so see it being an 80sish british punk type of thing... ya know?

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xanaphia [2004-03-12 22:41:55 +0000 UTC]

Hey hey... Thought I'd comment. Personally, I don't really like poetry that rhymes unless it's in song form. Most of my stuff doesn't rhyme... they're basically rants that just spew from my pen, much like this is turning out to be so I'll get on with it I like the message in this piece, it says a lot about how you think even though the rhyming may have been too much... you still got your thought across and it's a good one

Yay! I'm done! Cheers!

Meg

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ohgrbite In reply to xanaphia [2004-03-13 05:04:24 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Meg. actually this piece was a bunch of lyrics I cam eup with a few years ago for my old Band.. The Burning Roaches.. that's why I submitted it under "lyrical" eheh.

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redbloodserpents [2004-03-12 22:11:08 +0000 UTC]

i think you tried a tad too hard to rhyme. i like the chorus though.

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ohgrbite In reply to redbloodserpents [2004-03-12 22:20:15 +0000 UTC]

Yea I know heh.. i think that's part of the reason why my band never tried to write music for it.
I sometimes try too hard to emulate that weird nirvana-sh style of writing. Kurdt just can't be replaced you know. Thanks for the comment though. And a quick one might I add... WOW.

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redbloodserpents In reply to ohgrbite [2004-03-12 22:22:17 +0000 UTC]

thank you. yes kurdt was amazing, and priceless but we cant all be blessed with his facility with rhyming scheme. however. we are all a million times greater is so many ways.
kurdt is dead. but we arent yet. make the best of it.

i love how you added the d. most people didnt know that about him. most people are stupid anyways.

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