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Published: 2008-01-07 09:54:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 49; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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I still wish I were better at this but at least I'm learning Haelan again!Related content
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It's getting better, but there are still one or two problems. The colour on the horns still seems a bit off, as the yellow seems to overrun the lines. The line at the top of the cave looks much better, but the ones around the fire pit still seem a little to strong, you might want to cover them with a very light coat of green. Also, I'm not entirely sure the shading of the smoke is correct after the ridge at the top of the cave, as there should be less light there, unless the smoke itself glows. The gradient on the guy is much better now though, and doesn't seem to drop off as suddenly. The only other thing is that the middle horn, with lines that connect to the roof and similar colours, seems to meld with the cave to some degree. Make sure to show the distinction between the roof and Haelan.
There's your honest critique, as asked for.
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^^ I remember your colouring skills from a while ago, so while I would praise you, they haven't really improved much since then, they've just stayed decent quality. You haven't practiced it much to my knowledge, so it's all good, but you could be seriously talented in that art field too, again, if you gave it more focus. Not that I've proved to be anywhere close, and I'm not saying I'm better than you, but, well, you know. Practice Austin, always practice everything you know, and search for that which you do not.
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I've studied the way things look and work but you have definitely done more work and practiced with the medium more than I have. and yes I haven't done any work with color since either my self portrait or my chimney sweep.
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Didn't you do one of samus or something? I thought I remembered something looking like that. And while I've done more work with the medium, it hasn't been in the colouring-of-lineart department per se, which is a whole different skill set
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oh yeah I did that picture of that robot guy who's color scheme and outfit was very close to that of samus. but that one was terrible X( this one is definitely better.
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wow its amazing aussy! your really good at colouring on the pc!!!
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what? 0.o did I explode it?
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no *_* your painting skills are awesome *3*
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well the completely finished version is in my deviations.
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