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OldmanJaay β€” Redemption

Published: 2019-02-04 03:37:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 7837; Favourites: 72; Downloads: 112
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Description After I dealt with Michelle and Jessie it was easy to subdue Sarah and Kristin. All I had to do was invite them to join me for tea. What they didn't know was that I drugged the tea. Poor Sarah went down first. When Kristin already weak saw what happened she told me to call 911. I stood up like I was going to and I watched in satisfaction as Kristin fell to the ground. The Master's plan was perfect soon he will have his revenge.
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LORD-OF-PERIL3D [2019-03-05 00:17:08 +0000 UTC]

Can you give me a breakdown of the plot?

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OldmanJaay In reply to LORD-OF-PERIL3D [2019-03-06 02:20:27 +0000 UTC]

Well the first part of the story starts with this one www.deviantart.com/jaydeegee/g… this story begins where that one left off. The full story can be found here www.deviantart.com/jaydeegee/g… The simple version is that Riley is under hypnosis that which was placed on her by The Doctor from when she was his captive. Now she is his servant and she is evil

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diesel561 [2019-02-04 18:59:38 +0000 UTC]

Perfect damsel couple. Next time drink coffee. Β Β Β 

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OldmanJaay In reply to diesel561 [2019-02-05 01:32:16 +0000 UTC]

Much Safer

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Malasorte504 [2019-02-04 06:56:07 +0000 UTC]

Oh no! Thanks to her experience in crime-solving and investigation Riley know exactly how to subdue others. I really hope Riley will pay for her treachery and rot in jail. And the fact that she joyfully speaks about what she had done to Michelle and Jessie makes her crimes even worse. Riley don't deserbe any redemptiom after she betraying her friends, killng tow of them of who knows what evil things she's planning to do with Kristin and Sarah. But at least this kidnapping is not something vile she only drugged mother and daughter together without separating to victims.

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DarthFugue In reply to Malasorte504 [2019-05-15 08:32:43 +0000 UTC]

JayDeeGee ;

This is WHY I prefer to keep Drama RESTRICTED, to Literature: ONCE YOU LET IT IN – IRL – it's DIFFICULT TO REMOVE, AS YOU'RE (SLOWLY) POISONED, BY IT! 😡

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DarthFugue In reply to Malasorte504 [2019-05-15 08:18:40 +0000 UTC]

Who knows what evil things she's planning to do, with Kristin and Sarah? 😱


The SHADOW KNOWS!!! 😡

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OldmanJaay In reply to Malasorte504 [2019-02-05 01:32:48 +0000 UTC]

What's with this hate on with Riley

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Malasorte504 In reply to OldmanJaay [2019-02-05 07:10:50 +0000 UTC]

Betrayal is something that makes me feel like this toward Riley. She's an evil girl and since thereQs no cure for this hypmitic state she's beyond recovery.

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Cinemach [2019-02-04 03:54:28 +0000 UTC]

Oh MAN!Β  And from her POV!Β  Love it!

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OldmanJaay In reply to Cinemach [2019-02-04 03:56:34 +0000 UTC]

It's about to get wild

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Cinemach In reply to OldmanJaay [2019-02-04 04:00:19 +0000 UTC]

Β  Time to get the video camera out for all the excitementΒ 

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