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FlorestaOakwood [2017-10-19 14:48:54 +0000 UTC]

Hi. It's me. Thanks for being my 100th watcher! Anyways, this is a nice piece of art. I have a few tips tho.

1. The back is typically more curved than the stomach. just switch the curves of the lines.
2. her crotch is too low. raise it up a bit. that, or lengthen the hoodie.
3. The hood needs to be switched. It looks bigger on the far side.
4. The hips need to be a *little* wider

I recommend looking at professionals' art, studying how clothing works and anatomy. You can find great posing refs that are drawn by professionals and have great anatomy. Or, you can study how the body works in real life. Even if you are going for a more cartoony style, It's good to know how anatomy works.

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OoFluffoO [2017-08-30 15:54:24 +0000 UTC]

the eyes are really pretty btw..they remind me of how Disney and pixar would draw them!! 😱😱 ahhhh shes sooo cuuuuteee i wanna squish her cheeks!

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OoFluffoO [2017-08-30 15:53:26 +0000 UTC]

awe!!! 😍 this is such an adorable little drawing!! it makes me think of my younger teen years 😭 i also looove the sketchyness of the drawing! I will allways be a big fan of that sort of style!! but she is alittle stiff..but there is a way fix this! one way is to use a reference line, always make shure the hips and chest are never aligned with one another! by doing both of those suggestions it will make your art appear more alive and have more personality!! don't be afraid to play around with poses! C:

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