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BATTLEFAIRIES [2019-01-05 21:29:00 +0000 UTC]

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Hello, critique fairy here! In the spirit of Critmas (www.deviantart.com/beccajs/jou… ), I'm going to write a couple of lines about this piece and my impressions of it, if you don't mind.

I think this one really stood out to me, because of the intense jade colour. It is a very apt title! I also like the composition very much, with the wave just so and the dark rocks being so nicely contrasted with the super-light foam. Really nice shot!
There is but one thing which bothers me, and that's the rocks looking greyed out there on the left. I am wondering if it was spray that's doing this or if maybe some light got into your lens or? If you could get them to look close to as dark as the left rock at the top, that would help a lot, I think.

That's all, really. Thank you for sharing! Have a nice day and a Happy New Year on behalf of this year's Critmas Team Tannenbaum Trebuchet!

(PS: don't mind the stars, I don't like the system so I'm just giving everyone the same amount)

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boodlemoo [2019-01-09 20:07:22 +0000 UTC]

Nice capture!!!...

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