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Published: 2005-09-18 05:10:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 1316; Favourites: 38; Downloads: 65
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My nemesis. Too much "not working out" in terms of coloring and shading/highlighting. Arg. I like her, but there just seems to be something... needed.Related content
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Ah wow love the rattlesnake bone tat, flows nicely with her shape....
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me neither... thanx hun,
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Always happy to help... but seldom actually do
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looks nice. as for ideas of what else it could use... maybe some kind of prop to give her a location? or mebe another tattoo
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thanx for the suggestions darlin'... If I ever redo her, I'll totally use them!
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I feel the outline is too thick. it's conflicting with the tatoo snake. they are fighting for the eyes attention. They both end up on the same vissual plane. make the outline thinner or i sugest making the outline the same colour as the skin, but 4-5 shades darker.
See what that gives you.
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Oooooh, I love a good eye fight!
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Well a good eye fight is fine, it's just the brusing that's a bummer.
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Too me, it looks perfect as a drawing, its just the framing. Maybee add something like some neutral sqaures or circles in the top right space above her back. But I think it looks good.
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As usual, I think it's awesome. As much as I usually love the way you do the outline-by-using-color thing inside your bold outlines, I really like that you used black outlines throughout (the hair, small of her back, that kind of thing). At first I agreed that it needed...something...but then I went back through some other works of yours. Normally, your backgrounds are white, black, or white/black with a complimenting color shape/frame behind the main character. It might be something so simple as either lightening or darkening the background that might make it "pop" a bit more like most of your other pieces. Maybe I'm putting way too much thought into this and you're sitting there thinking, "Jesus, when is this moron gonna shut up?" Either way, I always look foward to your stuff.
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I love getting comments from my uber fan boy! You're always so positive, and that's so hot! *kisses*
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i love her hair. and the tattoo is very nice. and it does seem to be missing something. while i love the colors, i think you need one thing that pops. maybe make her lips bright red. or some other very vibrant color like that.
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Cool, thanx for the advice!
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