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Omnicenos — Antoine vs Sally: Weekly Spar

Published: 2009-01-07 01:03:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 13416; Favourites: 286; Downloads: 1151
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For , whose request was Antoine and Sally sparring, since they seem to be the only two of the core group who know how to use swords. Obviously, they’re gonna have to practice on eachother.

Back in my 5,000 kiriban, I was unclear on the rules, and there was some confusion. That was my fault, and I felt terrible, so…here you go! ^_^ I would have done it anyway as a simple request, it’s an awesome idea, and this was a lot of fun to make.

I gave them wooden swords and a cheering section so everyone knows it’s not serious. I’d imagine a wooden sword would still freaking hurt a lot, it’s basically getting hit by the edge of a board at high speed, so there’s still plenty of incentive to not get hit. O_o

Sorry this took so long, I kept getting distracted by Chrono Trigger DS. :3 Must…level…up…

All characters are ©Sega/Archie
Art is ©WingedHippocampus
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Comments: 172

Omnicenos In reply to ??? [2009-02-08 07:25:29 +0000 UTC]

Ha ha! XD Yeah, Ant can be pretty durn smexy.

Thank you!

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MissCassidy In reply to Omnicenos [2009-02-09 03:58:06 +0000 UTC]

yus yus indeed

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StringPetounPing In reply to ??? [2009-01-16 00:37:07 +0000 UTC]

Great picture. They look like they enjoying themselves during a warm afternoon. Tails sign look really childlike but considerating that he is the youngest character of the team, I suppose we can let it past. I will bet on Antoine. I must admit that he is cool without his shirt.

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Omnicenos In reply to StringPetounPing [2009-01-16 05:44:21 +0000 UTC]

Yes, the sign was intentionally childish, I even made sure to use my left hand when I wrote on it.

Shirtless Antoine for the win!

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zkfanart In reply to ??? [2009-01-12 02:47:34 +0000 UTC]

Tee hee, is a great show! Later they will have special seats, soda and someone with a camera ready to put the spar at youtube

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Omnicenos In reply to zkfanart [2009-01-15 02:41:50 +0000 UTC]

I would download it from YouTube if that happened! XD

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zkfanart In reply to Omnicenos [2009-01-15 16:04:11 +0000 UTC]

We ALL would love download it!

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vilsy In reply to ??? [2009-01-10 04:07:17 +0000 UTC]

Awesome job! The cheering section is a super-cute touch. I love Antoine's pose, it's really well done. Sal's so light on her feet! Love it.

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Omnicenos In reply to vilsy [2009-01-10 16:20:22 +0000 UTC]

^_^ Well, she's a chipmunky-squirrely thing, so I'd imagine she's quite agile. Thank you so much!

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Kitty-Girl456 In reply to ??? [2009-01-08 07:56:43 +0000 UTC]

More great work! They really look like they are having fun! I really like your coloring!

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Omnicenos In reply to Kitty-Girl456 [2009-01-08 08:06:55 +0000 UTC]

They are having fun, thanks!

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Kitty-Girl456 In reply to Omnicenos [2009-01-08 08:09:19 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I know!!! ^O^ ... so much fun! YW.

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Moony006 In reply to ??? [2009-01-07 20:42:33 +0000 UTC]

That's just cool! I love especially the way where sword was (if you know what I mean, dunno how to say this).

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Omnicenos In reply to Moony006 [2009-01-09 00:01:39 +0000 UTC]

I understand, and thank you!

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kaikaku In reply to ??? [2009-01-07 19:00:00 +0000 UTC]

Ohmygosh I knew you'd do an excellent job! I am SO so happy you decided to put the peanut gallery and sideline watchers in there. It adds an element of fun to the picture. Now that I think of it, this is sort of a good companion piece to your Ant/Sonic swimming lesson pic (yes I know that one is from the fanfic, but still, it is a smile-inducing training picture with sexy sexy Ant kicking ass).

Great job on Sally and Antoine's poses, they both look very dynamic. Bunnie's expression is my favorite in the picture, she just looks so darn excited.

Thanks so much for doing this for me, I highly appreciate it! I'm glad you got into the idea! Amazing job!

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Omnicenos In reply to kaikaku [2009-01-07 19:17:41 +0000 UTC]

^_^ Yay, you like it! I'm so happy! Heh, once the idea of the others cheering them on popped into my head, the picture didn't seem complete without them. Thank you!

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kaikaku In reply to Omnicenos [2009-01-09 17:20:58 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! You did a really amazing job! ^_^

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AsherTye In reply to ??? [2009-01-07 18:12:16 +0000 UTC]

Yes. Getting hit by a wooden sword hurts. Very much so. -_-

Very nice action scene here. I think Antoine going shirtless may be him trying to show off for the girls. Sally looks suitably impressed with his skill with a sword, perhaps it interrupted an attack when he swiped at her like that. I imagine its indicative of an strong improvement in Antoine's skill over the last time, 'cause she looks pleasantly surprised too.

I can see this being a weekly affair for them, especially with the flags their friends seem to have with them. Surprised this sort of thing doesn't attract more attention (Or is everybody else behind the camera? ) Tails looks particularly adorable with his little hand-made flag.

Once again you've done an excellent job here. The colors and the figures are wonderful. And I love the way you've done Bunnie's hair. Very interesting reinterpretation of the character.

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Omnicenos In reply to AsherTye [2009-01-07 19:15:01 +0000 UTC]

Ha ha, noooo, I'm not drawing a whole bunch of Knothole denizens, but you can pretend there are more off-scene if you'd like.

Yeah, I'm pleased with my Bunnie, I know she's...odd looking because she has Archie hair but SatAm fur and clothes...but...I like her anyway. ^_^ Thank you!

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AsherTye In reply to Omnicenos [2009-01-07 19:25:49 +0000 UTC]

Meh, I say go with what you like as far as a characters looks. I personally prefer Bunnie with long hair (not big hair, but long I think fits her, even with the ears).

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MarinaNeira In reply to ??? [2009-01-07 17:52:48 +0000 UTC]

The way you depicted the movement of the sword is great! Very dynamic.

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Omnicenos In reply to MarinaNeira [2009-01-07 19:12:51 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, I somehow forgot to add motion lines in the ink original so I added them in later with brown pencil, nice to hear it worked!

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MarinaNeira In reply to Omnicenos [2009-01-07 20:19:27 +0000 UTC]

I do believe it looks better this way than it would have looked if you had done them with ink.

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shimmyshammy In reply to ??? [2009-01-07 16:44:37 +0000 UTC]

Another lovely piece that has continued to grow well and demonstrate stronger aspects of portraying character anatomy and different scenes to present characters within. You've presented the scene well and really brought the energy of the characters, particularly within the foreground of the two sparing. You can sense the thrill of the event and the addition of warm hues helps increase this atmosphere. What it also does is allow us to see how you have become a lot stronger in anatomy for the way each one has been posed is much better than before, making them feel rather lively and loosened up.

Colour is done well although certain aspects feel too dark. Bunnie comes across very dark and perhaps a lighter hue would allow certain parts of her appearance to become more easier to view. The background is touched upon well with colour, but again I feel that the trees come across as too dark and makes it hard to see the detail that you have added.

Other than that you have done a nice job.

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Omnicenos In reply to shimmyshammy [2009-01-07 19:11:12 +0000 UTC]

Maybe I need to start compensating for my cheap scanner with lighter markers. I keep hoping I'll have enough money to get a good scanner so I don't have to mess with the brightness and contrast to get shading, pink, and light blue hues to show up. The original of this isn't nearly so dark, but again, instead of waiting for a better scanner, perhaps I should just start coloring differently. Thank you for bringing the problem up, and for your review, I always appreciate hearing from you!

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shimmyshammy In reply to Omnicenos [2009-01-10 16:22:50 +0000 UTC]

Well in time you'll master it.

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Trurotaketwo In reply to ??? [2009-01-07 14:27:19 +0000 UTC]

I don't know who to root for. Cool looking scene. Sonic doesn't look that interested though. He's more focused on popcorn by the looks of it

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Omnicenos In reply to Trurotaketwo [2009-01-07 14:35:35 +0000 UTC]

I say root for both!

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KaylaTheBat In reply to ??? [2009-01-07 13:22:51 +0000 UTC]

Great job, especially on the background & how dynamic you made Ant & Sal! The others look awesome, too, & its funny how Sonic's just carelessly snacking on his popcorn! XD

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Omnicenos In reply to KaylaTheBat [2009-01-07 14:35:11 +0000 UTC]

Heh, he's being entertained, what cares should he have? :3

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Ignatian-Mystic [2009-01-07 13:12:26 +0000 UTC]

AWESOOOOOMMME!!!

*faved*

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Omnicenos In reply to Ignatian-Mystic [2009-01-07 14:34:24 +0000 UTC]

XD

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Ignatian-Mystic In reply to Ignatian-Mystic [2009-01-07 13:13:25 +0000 UTC]

Has Antoine been workin' out?? He looks completely ripped!!

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yuyuhakushofan In reply to ??? [2009-01-07 12:08:48 +0000 UTC]

sonic is so cute eating popcorn

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Omnicenos In reply to yuyuhakushofan [2009-01-07 14:34:05 +0000 UTC]

Sonic loves popcorn. Not as much as chili dogs, though.

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pryme-caliber In reply to Omnicenos [2009-01-08 02:04:27 +0000 UTC]

I'm surprised he didn't put the popcorn ON a chili dog. Considering he was planning to put a whole tub of wasabi on them in your fic, I think anything would be fair game.

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Orumon In reply to ??? [2009-01-07 10:45:24 +0000 UTC]

Ahh, Now this is truly excellent. Thank you for putting this pic up, although I think both Sal and Ant are competent enough and know each other well enough to use genuine swords for training purposes.

It helps one to get better wih blades if they train with a full weight steels, after all.

(And that bit of useless trivia is part of the reason I have no right to comment on good artwork. It's facts like these that spoil it for everyone.)

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Omnicenos In reply to Orumon [2009-01-07 14:33:25 +0000 UTC]

Heh, yeah, like I said, there was a specific reason I gave them wooden ones. Int he Azami vs Antoine picture (the original, not the chapter illustration) I gave them live blades partly because I wasn't sure if it was serious or not, but here I wanted to make the point clear.

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Orumon In reply to Omnicenos [2009-01-07 15:48:22 +0000 UTC]

I see. Thank you/.

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Valejandra-Fox In reply to ??? [2009-01-07 06:15:31 +0000 UTC]

I'm rooting for Sal show the men how a real lady fights
I love the motion of the two, Antione's swooping sword effect caught my eye and I love Sally's pose. The other FFs in the back look awsome too!

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Omnicenos In reply to Valejandra-Fox [2009-01-07 14:30:09 +0000 UTC]

Hee hee, I'm cheering for both of them!

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GiaZeries In reply to ??? [2009-01-07 05:02:20 +0000 UTC]

This is amazing! Great use of motion! and yes those things do hurt quit a bit...and can break small bones... For whatever reason the Shirtless Antoine makes me smile (Think it may be the chest fluff) Also I like how you split the cheering section, with sonic more intrested in the snack then the winner ^-^

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Omnicenos In reply to GiaZeries [2009-01-07 14:38:37 +0000 UTC]

I likes teh fluffeh. :3 Oh yeah, like I said, I can imagine wood swords still hurt. Thanks!

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Gojira007 In reply to ??? [2009-01-07 03:12:38 +0000 UTC]

Stop being made of Win right this instant, pic! Do you hear me?

Seriously, good stuff. This is probably your fullest looking pic yet, actually. The background's fully realized and there's a much better sense of space than in your usual fare. The composition is also helpful in that regard, spreading things out a bit more evenly. Really, though, it's the characters that make it great, as always. Sal and Ant look to be having a grand old time, and I like how they have their own cheering sections.

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Omnicenos In reply to Gojira007 [2009-01-07 06:12:11 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. Full compositions are a new thing to me, so I'm still groping my way around them. Like...seriously new, I think it was as of....um...just a few months ago, not even a year, did I start regularly doing backgrounds, so I have a lot to catch up on. ._.

I have a different cheer flag in each hand. X3

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Gojira007 In reply to Omnicenos [2009-01-07 06:33:35 +0000 UTC]

Yes, I noticed; Tails' flag is so adorable it's almost unhealthy. XD

And yeah, full comps are a capital-B Bee-yotch. As someone who also rarely makes much use of them, I can understand the need to keep feeling your way through them.

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Shreedle In reply to ??? [2009-01-07 03:07:32 +0000 UTC]

Ooh... amazing! Those two really look like they're having fun. ^_^ And Sonic's just enjoying his popcorn... XD

You do realize that, with your fic, you've turned me into a Antoine fan, even though I barely know him?

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Omnicenos In reply to Shreedle [2009-01-07 06:08:33 +0000 UTC]

x.x I have a somewhat favorably distorted view on Antoine. I've taken the aspects of him that I like and have magnified and expounded on them. In SatAm he's little more than comic relief as the neurotic coward who talks funny. The comics are kinder to him once things get serious, though.

But keeping this in mind, I hope you do pick up SatAm or read an Archie comic at some point. ^_^

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Shreedle In reply to Omnicenos [2009-01-07 19:08:59 +0000 UTC]

I'll try to find them.

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StarlitSkvader In reply to ??? [2009-01-07 03:07:21 +0000 UTC]

Love the peanut gallery back there. XD I don't think Sonic cares WHO wins as long as he gets snacks!

The shading on Antoine's fur, and the blurring of the sword, are both really well done. Still love how you draw Antoine. X3

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