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Published: 2004-04-16 22:25:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 178; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 7
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Description Lights, flicker
Yellow, orange, red
Against their faces
Clouded in shadow
Her hand squeezes his
In anticipation
Inevitability
Fate

A second more
A breath more
A blink stolen
In the closing moments
As the credits role

They stop
Jean and cotton hoodies
Collide
Her hair
His lips
Nose against nose
Interminable seconds
Under a single, flickering porch light
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omnipotentseal - Shakespeare at 8 AM
Comments: 4

camassia [2004-04-16 22:28:55 +0000 UTC]

oo love this
even tho im not supposed to use that word i guess
its so beautiful
you should try getting pics for your poems
gettyimages.com
rocks~

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omnipotentseal In reply to camassia [2004-04-16 22:31:50 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, I'll keep that in mind...

I don't know much about the graphical stuff... I usually let my friend handle that stuff... She's great at it... Drew my icon... ~falseaidoru Check her out...

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camassia In reply to omnipotentseal [2004-04-16 22:33:13 +0000 UTC]

haha
she is good! i just looked round her gallery
animes not my style
but shes very talented

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PsychopathicEve [2004-04-16 22:28:32 +0000 UTC]

hey, i like that... >_< Nice job.

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