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Published: 2004-05-17 03:52:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 136; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 19
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Description Sitting
Watching
Knowing
Every breath
Every move
Weakness
In the subjects
In the observer
A moment
An attack of conscience
A sigh
The cold barrel is withdrawn
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omnipotentseal - Shakespeare at 8 AM
Comments: 5

yokom [2004-05-20 21:53:54 +0000 UTC]

this appeals to me just because it reads much more like the opening of a story than a poem. lovely.

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LoathedHate [2004-05-18 11:13:44 +0000 UTC]

Wow, I really like this poem alot. Its not long, but theres soo much feeling in it. Seems like you poured your heart into it.

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LoathedHate In reply to LoathedHate [2004-05-20 00:52:57 +0000 UTC]

lol, EMO KID!!! jk

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omnipotentseal In reply to LoathedHate [2004-05-19 23:22:06 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, when if I explained to you all the shit she put through, you'd see this is quite small. Oy, such an overly emotional human being am I.

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falseaidoru [2004-05-17 03:53:09 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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