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omnipotentseal — Thump, Thump
Published: 2004-07-11 04:16:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 310; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 21
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Description And so it fell
Thump, thump
On the warm, asphalt court
Thump, thump
As the bench’s cold aluminum
Relaxes tired arm muscles
It fails again
To reach
Its destination
Thump, thump
The passive  stadium light
Burns
And the moth goes
Thump, thump
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omnipotentseal - Shakespeare at 8 AM
Comments: 2

LoathedHate [2004-07-11 19:54:03 +0000 UTC]

holy shittaki!!! I LOVE THIS POEM... I dont normally like poems. But this WILL YOU HAVE MY BABY??!!

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omnipotentseal In reply to LoathedHate [2004-07-12 05:10:45 +0000 UTC]

So glad you liked my poem... Amazingly I wrote this nearly a week after I saw the actual moth hit the pavement... Hows that for irony... The one I wrote in my notebook isn't half as good... More satirical, when really the subject shouldn't be satirized... Thanks for the fav!

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