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Charming, adept, articulateWith his Abercrombie tee
Blue collared shirt
Wavy dirty blonde hair
And his leather bound, black book
Silver lining
Tissue pages
Reading a verse
He is a magician
His trick lies in his “truth”
He feigns nothing up his sleeve
She is entranced
By his knowledge
By his words
He claims
He was “bad”
He did drugs
Pot, cocaine, lived on “the edge”
A juvenile delinquent
A Rebel Without a Cause
Until he found God
Giggling
She is unaware
Of the Joker
Hiding behind the Cross
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Comments: 6
msfeistus [2004-06-19 02:30:01 +0000 UTC]
That's some great stuff ... (this is Marlowe from the Mess Hall, btw!)... off to find/read Profit/Prophet now!
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omnipotentseal In reply to msfeistus [2004-06-20 19:59:55 +0000 UTC]
Hey there... Didn't know there were other TMC members with DA accounts! Prophet/Profit is in my scrap book since its unfinished as of yet... I have to finish Grey's Matter first, then Profit/Prophet, then finally my Matrix fanfic, which I'll prolly post here.... And I haven't been doing a lot of writing recently...
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msfeistus In reply to omnipotentseal [2004-06-20 21:27:32 +0000 UTC]
Neither have I, really ... I finished a short Matrix fic the other day, but it's connected to the series I'm working on, so it doesn't really work well out of turn, and I'm afraid of posting it here.
Writer's block, bane of our existance, eh?
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Bambushka [2004-05-06 19:42:41 +0000 UTC]
This is really good, I really like the direction that this was taken. It was suttle, but still conveyed so much. Great work, I would like to see a follow up piece.
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omnipotentseal In reply to Bambushka [2004-05-06 22:33:21 +0000 UTC]
Well I would suggest reading Profit-Prophet... I basically carry over the idea of Youth Ministry and put it in a short story...
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falseaidoru [2004-04-09 23:47:05 +0000 UTC]
Why on Earth haven't you shown me some of these, you dork!?
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