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So i’m making this post to address some things about the Character known as Azzax Hegemone. People have come to me asking Why I made this character and address some other things about her that may have passed over your heads.

So to begin, let’s review her story taking place within the time line of Mass Effect 1 - 3 and some time after.

Azzax K. Hegemone had been recruited into the Turian military for several years as per the tradition of her race whom are required to serve at least once in their lives. She was well trained in general combat and even added her own little twist to it. Typically light hearted witty jokey joker life of the party trying to keep up morale in her squads. One day she had been sent with a small team to investigate about unusual Geth activity which they came to find that they were capturing and impaling people on dragons’s teeth on Eden Prime.
Azzax and her team had been ambushed by these Geth and all but a three of them including her had been captured and then placed on these dragons teeth and were impaled, she could feel her insides turning but something strange happened, weather it was will power or sheer luck or both she fought it back and it malfunctioned. She was able to pull herself off the spike and get loose and crawl away with a large hole in her (hence that scar you see under her boob going down her belly). Luckily she found Medi-jell to patch up the wound but passed out from the blood loss and the shock from it. During her time unconscious she started to see those dark figures whispering in a language she couldn’t understand until she woke up at the citadel wondering if what happened was a dream or for real soon learning it was all reality. 

Not long after she was well enough to leave the hospital she would hear the subtle whispers of several voices in her mind until it was audible enough to make out. At night dreams continued to get more and more unnerving with flashes of people melting and turning into husks like she almost did, so much so she started to hear the whispers in her head while she was awake at times, it was driving her mad, this was a after it had been apparent the reapers were coming, the whispers got more and more intense and the voices multiplied telling her to do this and that and the next until she eventually cracked and lost her mind giving into the madness and found herself flying into fits of rage and crying fits then to maniacal laughter sometimes in the same instance, hallucinating seeing the dead glowing blue eyes the husks had in everyone she saw. The fear was almost crippling because she couldn’t understand what it all meant and screaming at the voices to shut up to the point where she hardly slept at all, barely eating. 
However she was too stubborn to kill herself to escape the noise and too strong willed to fall under their control. After coming to terms that these voices were here to stay she one day decided to go in another direction… she started listening to hat they were telling her… Not following their orders, only listening as she continued to try to function properly in public. Eventually she started talking back to them defiantly taunting them, daring them to come get her and promising that she would kill them all off. Azzax had always been a very powerful Biotic since she had been in the military switching from an Adept to a Cabal Vanguard, and this exposure to the reaper tech had somehow only increased her power (round mass effect 3 when the reapers arrived and began “harvesting”)
She would listen closely and followed her gut feeling until she actually came face to face with one of them, a destroyer class, stood about 160 meters high, With no regard to her own life she went for it with a bat she had found and actually managed to knock out its seemingly impenetrable shield with the force of her stroke coupled with the Biotic power of warp. Amazing! she thought, She had no idea she was capable of this and tried again teleport flash stepping around bludgeoning the Reaper from every angle she could until she finally crippled it. But she didn’t stop there, she went for its primary weapon next, laughing all the way through Hitting it again and again denting and cracking its armor until she finally broke it down! With a dented up bent bat she looked triumph-idly at the now dying Reaper in shambles in front of her and taunted it as its light faded telling it how it couldn’t control her as easily as it thought.

From then on she contributed in the fight against the reapers while still dealing with them whispering in her head so far she had taken down another one by herself utilizing her immense and growing biotic power the same was as she did the first time. Once she figured out how to take down their shields with her Biotic power then the rest was just looking for physical weak points to whack with a new bat she had made that was reenforced with a much stronger metal, namely the joints on their legs and primary weapon. She passionately referred to her fight against the reapers as “Horde mode” their 10,000 + lives vs her 1. She found herself enjoying the thrill of such a great battle! this had been going on for a couple of years where she learned to control her power and use it more effectively against the reapers and their forces trying to learn how they work, how they attack, what their weaknesses were practicing each and every day she could.

Making her way to earth where the final battle had been taking place Azzax found herself standing face to face with a Harbinger, the reaper whom had been plaguing her mind since all those years ago. She was overtaken with glee and spoke to it telling it that its ass was officially hers, full of confidence she leaped at it striking it’s hull with all the force she could muster but this time it’s shield was stronger than she expected, but she would not give up! Again and again going after its weak points trying her best to cripple it that shield was holding. She had to do something or she might die this time… It fired at her and without thinking about it she put a barrier up and watched as it deflected and went in another direction and the heat burned through her armor which gave her an idea, to take down a shield like that she would have to use its own weapon against it. Jumping up and flash stepping to a tall building she taunted it daring her to shoot her again, telling it that it was weak and that she was still standing.

Falling for her taunt it fired again but more intensely, this was her one chance to make this happen! She jumped up and as it fired and hit her barrier again she redirected the beam back at it and it sliced right through it’s own shield and pierced its hull. She wasted no time and flashed stepped to it as quickly as she could and went for it’s legs holding it up until the joints cracked, from the force of how hard she was hitting it she had been cracking the bones in her arms… but she couldn’t stop, she wouldn’t stop! With everything she had she struck it again and again cracking it’s hull wide open until she could get inside it and start to tear it apart from the inside. It finally fell… The Harbinger had finally been defeated! Azzax crawled her way out of the reaper, weak and tattered and a broken arm laughing at it still taunting about how she won, it was beat all by the hands of one mentally broken turian woman. and feel to her back looking up at the citadel floating there over them and gave it a thumbs up as a brilliant flash of light exploded from it passing over everything destroying the reapers and husks in the area and soon the whole world.

Smiling through all the blood she coughed up from exerting all that power that her body could barely handle she fell unconscious with a big grin on her face, finally it was over, the voices were gone… she could finally die knowing she accomplished the impossible. Oddly enough, she didn’t die, in stead she awoke in the med bay of a ship with another turian woman walking in sighing in relief that she finally woke up. Apparently she had been under for over a month and would have died had she and her friends not found her laying there. The woman introduced herself as Buccha and that she was a nurse and she had been taking care of her while she slept. 

Azzax thanked her very much for saving her but then inquired about why she did. Buccha had apparently been looking for her following the trail of rumors and leads about an incredibly powerful Turian woman had been roaming around the solar system killing reapers and wanted to learn about her biotic power. Her and a crew of three, a Turian, a Quarian and a geth all wanted to meet her! Azzax was flattered and continued to play catch up with the events that had passed since she was found, pleased to hear that the galaxy was rebuilding from the siege of the reaper menace. With nothing else to do with her life that was when Azzax decided to stick with this wayward crew in which more misadventures took place as she continued to heal mentally and slowly adjust to having a normal life.

And that concludes her story for the time being.

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Now to address some controversies with this character in design. For why I created her that way, for starters I saw an opportunity and I took it, Before Bioware came out with the post about turian boobs which I am almost convinced they made because every other person had pitch forks and torches ready to linch them for having Turian females be more human female and for some reason a lot of people are unreasonably critical about the human body/ mammal aspect of things, but that’s neither here nor there it can very well be respectable to have a larger turian rather than the canon ones are. I mean, it’s cool to see. Not every race, even one with a high metabolism, is gonna be all skinny and stuff right? 

Bioware has left a lot of loose ends open for interpretation as well, save for that very early concept art of them they haven’t released or designed whats under their clothing/armor, just gave a general and somewhat vague shape. SO, Opportunity strikes and Azzax was born!
now of course I have a preference and appreciation love for the curvier and or stronger side of the spectrum and somewhat rebel against the personification of the “perfect body” which is usually depicted as slender thin, hourglass tight waist shaped, B/C/D cups and anything above or below that line is seen as flowed or overly sexualized (here where I live at least) and must alter themselves to reach that line or they aren’t beautiful or are Too beautiful. A little human anatomy don’t have to hurt nobody was where my mind was at. Just as y'all have made alteration to the bodies you draw to fit your personal preferences. 

Azzax was also created to challenge these “preferences” set by society and to also drive the point that people can’t control how they’re born and how their body develops (save for how they take care of it of course) and just because they look a certain way doesn’t mean they’re that they’re automatically slutty or anorexic or ugly or whatever. And the way they dress could simply mean they think they look good in that outfit not that they’re trying to get attention or show off. like for example, if You were to wear a low cut tank top with a sweet design on it, I can without a doubt say that you’re probably not thinking “Heh heh yeah i’m gonna get all the guys to look at me with this shirt”
no, you wear it because you like it and it looks great on you. Not only that but to get people to look past her assets and see HER for who she is, that she snot just some big slutty woman because her boobs are big or because she has thick curves, of which I succeeded in doing and am pretty proud of that accomplishment. 

Again it’s been left open for interpretation. Besides that who’s to say that Turian’s can’t have Mammal like traits along with their raptor ones ey?
But I digress. Azzax is indeed one of a kind i’m sure and none else would dare to step over that line, but who knows. perhaps others may dabble into designing Turian ladies as such. I wouldn’t bank on that because change ain’t something everybody likes and can be passionate and somewhat stubborn about how they feel which is fair enough.

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As for her power, I know what you’re thinking “Azzax is too overpowered, she is too strong, that’s so boring and like there’s absolutely no sort of threat for her.” to which I would say “Absolutely she is ridiculously powerful with her biotics” and she can’t just turn it off. Since her battle with the Harbinger she had been gaging everyone to that thing and she has concluded that there is nothing they can threaten her with. And that’s the point, she has received all this power and used it well to help defeat the biggest threat to the galaxy of mass effect. after that she has nothing left that could challenge her.. where can she go from there? which brings up a totally different challenge. And THAT is the point you’re missing here. to live a life of being a target to anyone who knows about her, constantly treated like a monster and a freak of nature, she can never have the normal life she one had. she can’t settle down no matter where she goes, and she refuses to let herself be killed by someone she would deem unworthy, it will be an endless cycle. the challenge is that she needs to make a decision, to use her power to help people, to kill and destroy or kill herself and end it all. what will she pick? who knows.

Sort of a god amongst men story. yes, it’s a story of coming from humble beginnings to a downward spiral to a power trip and back to being humble with a monumental responsibility that she has to learn to cope with or let it consume her. is she immortal? no, is she invincible? absolutely not! but she does have a solid defense and her creativity in how to use her power. Will she just simply brush off anyone who stands in her way? to a certain degree but she will handicap herself to at least try to make it a “challenge”, otherwise it would simply be boring for her. She will have to learn to use her power towards something else than just fighting people, like standing up for the weak against those stronger than them.

Thank you for reading and I hope this will give you insight on the character of Azzax.

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Comments: 28

Tashrin [2017-04-14 13:14:01 +0000 UTC]

When it comes to mass effect, the asari are the worst offenders I find for what makes sense body wise, yet most are fine with blue space women who look like women while not having a male member of their species? But have a problem with a turian with boobs? 

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Omnoproxyl337 In reply to Tashrin [2017-04-15 03:49:05 +0000 UTC]

an all female race does not sound unreasonable, after all males only have one major use in nature that females generally cannot do. 

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Tashrin In reply to Omnoproxyl337 [2017-04-15 04:11:55 +0000 UTC]

A single gender species would be built as a mix of both genders then, not strictly female. There would be no need for a single race species to need a very clearly set gender of a 2 gender race. 

Anyway, if people are fine with that, then they should have 0 problem with turians with boobs. 

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screwedontight In reply to Tashrin [2020-05-01 10:26:49 +0000 UTC]

Monogender species do exist in real life. There's a whole species of lizards that is nothing BUT girls. 

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Omnoproxyl337 In reply to Tashrin [2017-04-15 04:44:48 +0000 UTC]

im just sayin
but its funny how people get so up in arms about a body and make a bigger stink of it than the actual people theyre complaining for.

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Antinov [2016-03-01 16:08:20 +0000 UTC]

Such Sue, much Mary.

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Omnoproxyl337 In reply to Antinov [2016-03-01 17:29:33 +0000 UTC]

wow :y

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Jedi-Qui-Gon In reply to Omnoproxyl337 [2016-03-03 13:39:45 +0000 UTC]

Don't listen to people like Antinov. Sounds like a person who is jealous of you so tries to call your character a mary-sue to try to demoralize you.


You have every right to do your character the way you want to. And you don't need to change things to fit canon if you don't want to. After all, its fanfiction/fanart.


And besides, the word mary-sue (gary-stu for male characters) has honestly lost all meaning to me. There's so many definitions floating about. It had an original meaning but it seems to be lost to the shifting sands of time. Now it can mean anything- a character that sticks out, a character that is too special (that kind of fits the original meaning it seems), a character they don't like, and more. And sometimes it seems the word is used as a way for jealous individuals to get at people. Now it'd be a different story if someone were to use it the right way, and give constructive criticism.


Hope I was able to help.


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Omnoproxyl337 In reply to Jedi-Qui-Gon [2016-03-03 14:26:44 +0000 UTC]

the term marry Sue is only used for sake of convenience anyway :y

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Jedi-Qui-Gon In reply to Omnoproxyl337 [2016-03-04 13:56:58 +0000 UTC]

Not surprised really. A word used like that will lose any real meaning eventually...


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aha-mccoy [2016-03-01 15:29:05 +0000 UTC]

I'll read the whole thing later because I gotta go work in few min 'X3
but anyway I really love the way you draw your characters >w>

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Omnoproxyl337 In reply to aha-mccoy [2016-03-01 15:52:46 +0000 UTC]

well ok :y
and i am glad you love it c:

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TheGentChestBurster [2016-03-01 11:06:04 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the info bro

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Omnoproxyl337 In reply to TheGentChestBurster [2016-03-01 12:44:50 +0000 UTC]

you welcome 

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Pyremoonshadow [2016-03-01 04:30:32 +0000 UTC]

A great explination about azzax ^-^ and dont let other people stop you from drawing her or other turians you got ^-^

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Omnoproxyl337 In reply to Pyremoonshadow [2016-03-01 12:46:19 +0000 UTC]

I do not let them control my decisions, I did this for me too  

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Blademarker716 [2016-03-01 03:33:24 +0000 UTC]

Controversies and preferences be damned! Draw what you want, even if it goes against what people expect/want in a character!

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Omnoproxyl337 In reply to Blademarker716 [2016-03-01 12:45:34 +0000 UTC]

I will and I do, I did this because I wanted to not because I needed to :y

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blastermath [2016-03-01 01:15:18 +0000 UTC]

Interesting stuff. I think the problem with her overpoweredness is that we haven't really seen much of her internal struggles. A lot of it's just been her kicking ass and having a blast, with some personal issues here and there. 

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Omnoproxyl337 In reply to blastermath [2016-03-01 01:24:57 +0000 UTC]

im pretty sure most of the things ive drawn shows that she is having internal mental issues 

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furyfire22 [2016-03-01 00:09:02 +0000 UTC]

interesting read about a interesting character. i have never played mass effect but i really like this and many of your other characters. Maybe it is because i am very open minded and i too have a affinity for as you said " for the curvier and or stronger side of the spectrum " .   

Your Art of your characters always makes me smile and sometimes laugh. Keep Up the Great Work.  

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Omnoproxyl337 In reply to furyfire22 [2016-03-01 00:10:43 +0000 UTC]

you flatter me ;3
i appreciate that 

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hattonslayden [2016-02-29 23:50:35 +0000 UTC]

you draw YOUR characters the way YOU want to

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Omnoproxyl337 In reply to hattonslayden [2016-03-01 00:08:11 +0000 UTC]

That is correct :y

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Belgess [2016-02-29 23:29:29 +0000 UTC]

I'm afraid I'm going to have to file this under "Read Later".
Also didn't know bout the Hegemone part.

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Omnoproxyl337 In reply to Belgess [2016-02-29 23:40:26 +0000 UTC]

if you're only commenting to tell me you'll read it later then i ask you, why are you bothering to tell me that when you could read it whenever you want?

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Belgess In reply to Omnoproxyl337 [2016-02-29 23:51:38 +0000 UTC]

Because it looks like a big story and I like big stories?

It seemed like a good idea at the time.

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Belgess In reply to Belgess [2016-03-01 23:06:34 +0000 UTC]

Okay then, Having finally read the story I feel I can now share my thoughts properly.
First, I feel like this could be a skeletal kind of outline for a book or two in the ME universe and I'm pretty okay with that.
Second, This does give me a better understanding of just WHO Azzax really is rather than her just being a partially indoctrinated crazy turian woman with a bat who's crazy strong, which to be honest was most of what I was getting from her earlier pieces.  And I think it's kinda funny that in a way she seems to be a sort of One Punch Man-esk character with a more "human" ackground (albeit traumatic) rather than "I got this strong by training really hard."
So yeah, it's a pretty good read and sets her up in your typical "power lady" fashion as you are want to do.

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