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Published: 2014-02-08 08:02:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 6141; Favourites: 125; Downloads: 0
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Description "Appolion the devil king... the man solely responsible for the torturous lives my sister and I endured up to the point we first crossed paths. The man responsible for helping to conceive us only to sell out the woman he took advantage of for pleasure and attempt to sell us to the local government for military slavery purposes just to make a quick buck, The man who takes pleasure in the suffering of others... these are the things we were told from the dying breath of the man overseeing our progress into slavery, ArcherΒ Kalach... since that day we hunted for Appolion... we did find him and we did try our best to beat him... unfortunately he overpowered us and left us battered and bruised. and in his arrogance he challenged us to get stronger and come find him so he can beat us down again. heh... it didnt really take us long to find him a second time, this time we were much stronger than before and ready for whatever he could throw at us... or so we thought. We soon found out where that demonic side of us really came from when he turned into that monster. All we had was our second form and even with our combined strength it just wasnt enough... we were overwhelmed by his strength. then he started boasting, about how weak we were and how he wishes our mother was here in stead of in that prison in this divine realm so she could watch him kill us... after that I... I dont really remember much, just me snapping and stopping him as he was about to hit Victoria again, I felt like I had reached into a well of strength I didnt know I had. All I could think about was where our mother was being kept and protecting my sister as I overpowered him kicking him around the area like a rag doll breaking him piece by piece. Next thing I knew I had beat him down to an inch... For some reason I couldnt speak clearly but im sure he understood what I wanted, "WHERE?! WHERE?!" was all I could really say. laughing through his broken teeth and bloody mouth he spat at me speaking in some weird demon language I couldnt understand, I could only assume he was saying something about how we would never find our mother and there was nothing we could do... It was a great yet bitter victory, but... we now have a new lead on finding what happened to our mother, she was a live! So that was more than enough of a reason to keep it moving, and a whole new form to master. On the upside though im finally stronger than my sister now!...That is... until she figures out how to transform too... well shit."






















still working on some things, but im glad that i could finally get to drawing something like this after years of thinking of it. Progress!

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Omnoproxyl337 In reply to ??? [2014-02-08 16:44:08 +0000 UTC]

obviously she wasnt sleepingΒ 

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GrimxWolf In reply to Omnoproxyl337 [2014-02-08 21:48:19 +0000 UTC]

I know now i read it. pretty good story kept me from playing my game.

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Omnoproxyl337 In reply to GrimxWolf [2014-02-08 21:53:41 +0000 UTC]

wel thanksΒ 

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GrimxWolf In reply to Omnoproxyl337 [2014-02-08 21:56:04 +0000 UTC]

Story writing is a good way to pass time. Especially when your bored and you have " artist block ".

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Anthonylix09 In reply to ??? [2014-02-08 15:10:16 +0000 UTC]

thats most epicness battle and demon combat i ever seen

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Omnoproxyl337 In reply to Anthonylix09 [2014-02-08 16:44:22 +0000 UTC]

wow really? :0

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Anthonylix09 In reply to Omnoproxyl337 [2014-02-08 18:09:24 +0000 UTC]

yeah

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UnknownJester In reply to ??? [2014-02-08 14:48:48 +0000 UTC]

wow. that is really good, if the rest of the story behind these characters is like this then i am deffinetly going to have to read it

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Omnoproxyl337 In reply to UnknownJester [2014-02-08 16:44:38 +0000 UTC]

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UnknownJester In reply to Omnoproxyl337 [2014-02-08 17:38:28 +0000 UTC]

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aha-mccoy In reply to ??? [2014-02-08 14:44:29 +0000 UTC]

ww seems like a very epic battle. I hope she's ok. you drew them all very well. their bodies and poses are very very well done! awesome pic!Β 

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Omnoproxyl337 In reply to aha-mccoy [2014-02-08 16:45:32 +0000 UTC]

shes surprised to see her brother that wayΒ 

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aha-mccoy In reply to Omnoproxyl337 [2014-02-09 14:30:10 +0000 UTC]

ah I see

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J82 In reply to ??? [2014-02-08 14:09:29 +0000 UTC]

This is awesome!!! Appolion a great old school villain.

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Omnoproxyl337 In reply to J82 [2014-02-08 16:45:11 +0000 UTC]

oh yeah, to hell with cliches rightΒ 

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J82 In reply to Omnoproxyl337 [2014-02-08 21:52:59 +0000 UTC]

Right, nothing more badass than a no-nonce villian. Β Love his design.

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Omnoproxyl337 In reply to J82 [2014-02-08 22:05:51 +0000 UTC]

thank youΒ 

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J82 In reply to Omnoproxyl337 [2014-02-08 22:34:27 +0000 UTC]

No Problem.

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vitam30 In reply to ??? [2014-02-08 13:51:21 +0000 UTC]

........damn

I like the way Appolion looks

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Omnoproxyl337 In reply to vitam30 [2014-02-08 16:44:53 +0000 UTC]

thanks! me too

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theojeca In reply to ??? [2014-02-08 09:44:50 +0000 UTC]

That epicness. And sweet story!

You doing good. Way too good...

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Omnoproxyl337 In reply to theojeca [2014-02-08 09:46:38 +0000 UTC]

i honestly see myself as a mediocre/ novice writer, but i am glad you like it anyway ^^

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theojeca In reply to Omnoproxyl337 [2014-02-08 13:10:29 +0000 UTC]

ah welcome

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theflame234 [2014-02-08 08:14:14 +0000 UTC]

Oh shit, father vs son & daughter.
Just to clear things up, did he only beat his dad or did he kill him?

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Omnoproxyl337 In reply to theflame234 [2014-02-08 08:18:59 +0000 UTC]

he killed him

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theflame234 In reply to Omnoproxyl337 [2014-02-08 08:21:28 +0000 UTC]

Ah, thank you and that was pretty good read might I add.

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Omnoproxyl337 In reply to theflame234 [2014-02-08 08:25:26 +0000 UTC]

oh thank you ^^

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theflame234 In reply to Omnoproxyl337 [2014-02-08 08:53:49 +0000 UTC]

BTW, what did he mean by "beat him down to an inch", like literally or as a metaphor to how badly he pulverized him.

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Omnoproxyl337 In reply to theflame234 [2014-02-08 08:58:40 +0000 UTC]

yes

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theflame234 In reply to Omnoproxyl337 [2014-02-08 09:00:19 +0000 UTC]

Yes to which one, cause right now you just confused me.

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Omnoproxyl337 In reply to theflame234 [2014-02-08 09:01:26 +0000 UTC]

he beat him down to an inch of life left

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theflame234 In reply to Omnoproxyl337 [2014-02-08 09:06:03 +0000 UTC]

Oh, I had thought he meant an inch in height, didn't think that he meant as in how close he was to death.

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Omnoproxyl337 In reply to theflame234 [2014-02-08 09:09:59 +0000 UTC]

well now you knowΒ 

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theflame234 In reply to Omnoproxyl337 [2014-02-08 09:14:12 +0000 UTC]

You learn something everyday, it may not be educational but you learn reguardless.

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theflame234 In reply to Omnoproxyl337 [2014-02-08 08:27:11 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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