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FACEBOOK FANPAGE | MY SITE | TWITTERBeware the Jabberwock, Alice
The jaws that bite, the claws that catch
Beware the infernal breath, and malice
The frumious Bandersnatch!
The Vorpal Blade her hand has borne
Long time the manxome foe she sought
So there she stood by side of gryphon
And Rage came in thought.
The Jabberwock, with eye aflame
Came whiffing through Queensland
Screeching murder as he came
The Vorpal blade was quick to rend
she left it dead, on the ground, forlorn
The Blade trembles, still sanguine.
Her minions pave the way to the throne
All I am is thirst for the queen.
Where is that wretched creature?
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Written By Ido Freedman
Directed by me
we re-wrote the original poem (:
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Comments: 28
Very nice, creative re-write indeed!
The metre is slightly off though, which makes it a bit too clear it's an alteration. The wording is nice, nevertheless!
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I plan on posting the Jabberwocky poem on my page, in just a sec, if you wanna look.
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i was wondering something; i am writing the Novel for the 1st game and, could i use this in it
u see, when Alice goes to Skool, she finds a book with the poem
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okay, at least i tried, thanks
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Amazing skill with the poem. It almost sounds as if Carroll wrote this himself. Such careful and precise wording means that you have quite a gift!
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now i am jealous, i just love it
i also love the fact u re:did the poem
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I never noticed the Jabberwock pass through Queensland. Hmmm sneaky mongrel. Very well done, love.
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AWESOME! I like the original poem of the Jabberwock, but this.....this is outstanding!
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*STANDING OVATION* Thank You
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To see a world in a grain of sand and heaven in a wild flower, hold infinity in the palm of your hand and eternity in an hour. William Blake
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The Jabberwock, One of the most terrifying, monster throughout recorded history. (some say that This creator helped inspire ever legend about monsters and Dragons.)
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To me, anything alice-related is bound to be epic, but this on itself is a really nice one too ^.^
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Out-Standing presentation in how it seems to be illuminated and drawn! It's drawn in such a Perfect manner that it could be a photo of a book Wow!
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Your work is just amazing...
For the image above the text, did you create that font yourself, or is there an actual book or something that has that exact picture?
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the font someone made it, it's the exact font that is used in the game
the paintings are changed paintings from the original book and the book is not real, i wish it was though...
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Thanks!
It would be cool to have a real book of it...
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Can't there be a larger image of it, downloading doesn't seem to work. D:
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it's not suppose to be larger,
it's txt.
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Oooh, Very Fantastically Fitting to Game Scene, and Very Interesting Chapter Page! Did You Draw It? Sir?
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i remade the original image of the jabberwock to fit the American McGee's version.
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