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OneOfManyNames — Soul Set Free
Published: 2008-03-12 17:48:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 177; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 2
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Why do you all look so sad?With downcast faces and frowning lips
Don’t grieve for me
For my soul has been set free
Don’t cry tears of sadness
Instead, let tears of joy rain down
Be glad and jump for joy!
Don’t grieve for me
For my soul has been set free
I’m out of pain and limitless
With my family I’ve missed so much
They prepared a place for me
Just as I now do for you
Don’t grieve for me
For my soul has been set free
I’ll look down from the heavens
To watch and protect
I’ll be there with you everyday
Just reach up
And I promise to be there with Him
Don’t grieve for me
For my soul has been set free
And now to end this verse
A single promise I’ll make
We’ll be together again someday
When your soul is also set free
Comments: 3
Awww... 
It's pretty good. Maybe if you separated it into stanzas (starting each time you say "Don't grieve..." perhaps?) it would be easier to read.
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Alright, thanks for the advice! And for the hug...lol
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No problem...for both!
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