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OneSheepArmy — Mst-or03
Published: 2013-03-23 01:30:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 708; Favourites: 11; Downloads: 0
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First of all: I hate my scanner! Sorry if the digitalization is not top-notch...I always try my best!
My OC "Thunder Girl" (no slutty outfit, more Black Mary Marvel-style) feels powerless, so the guy called "Spectral Wayfarer" (in italian language sounds better in my opinion: "Viandante Spettrale") try to cheer her up. Not his cup of tea, to be honest...trust me: I created him!
Done with brush - and ink, of course -.
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One Sheep - Very nice page. The body language, facial expressions and tones are just right. You have conveyed this story without words and the reader will imagine what is being said. Strong and full of impact. To improve this page, consider more variety. The figures seem to want to show emotion. Even though I think you are aiming for a certain amount of suspense or tension by holding the shots, think about what an even tighter close-up in panel two or four could do to the page. Overall very well done. RICK
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I wanted a slow rhythm for all the 3 pages in combination with the dialogue, which is really intense. My goal was to transmit to the readers the sensation of sobbing through the sequences, like they could feel the tears coming from the characters through the rhythm of the panels. I hope this make sense!
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