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Published: 2006-10-03 21:11:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 60; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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REMEMBER!?!?!Think of the times,
He treated you right,
remember the memories,
once held so tight,
Forget the difficulties,
you killed along the way,
Forget all the I love yous,
you forgot to say,
He never doubted you,
or so he said,
FORGIVENESS!!!
The word never should have been said,
But forgiveness was forgiven,
All done by the forgiver,
ALL TRAPPED INSIDE MY GOD DAMNED HEAD!!!
Remember his face
REMEMBER THE PLACE!?!?!
Where you spilt your heart
AND IT WAS GONE WITHOUT A TRACE!?!?!?!
But you traced a new one in the sand
Led along by his brothers hand
OH GOD I WISH I COULD MAKE MY HEAD STRAIT!!!!
OH GOD WHY CANT I JUST GET THIS STRAIT?!?!?!
Remember my name
Remember my face
REMEMBER
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Comments: 3
mage-006 [2006-10-04 20:15:26 +0000 UTC]
interesting, difficult to follow at times, but I think I can get the idea of it. and so I reply with a poem of my own
whose hand is leads who?
is it someones master plan
thats been devised before time began?
or is it only a plan conceived
out of desperate nescicity (sp)?
Perhaps its more than what it seems
or perhaps its less than you believe
lol, that was fun. well, ttyl
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onlyonereasonforthis In reply to mage-006 [2006-10-05 02:23:59 +0000 UTC]
Oh boy, now you're trying to confuse me! you ham! I reply with my own poem!
Trick the innocent,
With wicked smiles,
You know of which hand leads me,
I hold on,
To a loving hand,
No amount of trickery can comprehend.
Thanks for the comment!^_^
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mage-006 In reply to onlyonereasonforthis [2008-10-22 11:28:49 +0000 UTC]
But in the end we see
What could never be
To fight for so long
A heart ended wrong
The once broken
Breaks another
The cycle goes
Fight and defend
With who will it end?
For some reason I am in a poetry mood tonight.
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