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i.once, I did not understand
the riot
of a not-quite,
maybe-never-will
touch –
sleep, hovering
just there,
pleasure in denial.
ii.
Wendy’s parking lot
watching someone
watching Princess Bride
in their second floor apartment
and you know man,
it’s one of those infinite moments
where you have to just
dunk your fry
in the Frosty
and say I do not think it means
what you think it means.
(we might be the men in shirtsleeves
but not lonely not now
leaning in.)
iii.
we go out because
the time left
is as short as
the distance will be long
and there’s nothing like a bar
on a Monday night
to make you feel
apocalyptically alive,
struggle-joined with the other
heavy-jacketed, smoke-curtained
defiers of the law
of the weekend.
iv.
the liminal
fallen lids
double-bass
60 oz. taurine
might just
heart-
stop
v.
no one ever gets to the end
and wishes they’d slept more.
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Comments: 7
thereaperman [2014-04-17 13:01:04 +0000 UTC]
like your use of language and verse breaks, never a fan of red bull but can relate to hallucinations and the like from sleep deprivation, must write it down one day..... LOVE your stuff!
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oracle-of-nonsense In reply to thereaperman [2014-04-17 18:29:31 +0000 UTC]
Sleep deprivation is an interesting beast, no matter how or why you achieve it. Thanks for reading!
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thereaperman In reply to oracle-of-nonsense [2014-04-17 20:09:27 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for writing it, I'm genuinely excited to read your stuff whenever I log on keep it coming!
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oracle-of-nonsense In reply to thereaperman [2014-04-17 20:19:26 +0000 UTC]
Will try! I've got a few more older ones to upload, and then with summer coming I should have more time to write
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thereaperman In reply to oracle-of-nonsense [2014-04-19 12:07:15 +0000 UTC]
I've got about 200 volumes to write up from the last 2 years, don't think I will ever get round to it, just sitting in my top drawer gathering dust..... bring on more poetry young lady!
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oracle-of-nonsense In reply to thereaperman [2014-04-22 18:29:18 +0000 UTC]
Good gravy that's a lot of writing up to do!
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thereaperman In reply to oracle-of-nonsense [2014-04-29 12:40:31 +0000 UTC]
indeed, I do feel an urge to.... be creative coming on.....looking forward to more of yours! hope all Is good
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