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When diamond stars illuminate the sky,Oh! Lovers wander under shade of night
Unfettered by the daylight they defy -
Cracked concrete worlds seem diff'rent than in light;
By heaven lanterns' shine they find their way
To love or false affection bear their heart;
These lovers' actions - hid from face of day -
Embrace each other, lest they fall apart;
But these are more than poetry and verse,
You know them well, these two pair night bound sparks;
And they have reason still to tryst, to curse,
Without a care they wield their handgun hearts;
To witness amours' life one night erupt,
They have both passion pure and love corrupt
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ShadowRavenAMZ [2010-01-03 06:10:43 +0000 UTC]
Great poem! but wherefore art thou Grey? Krisin misses you!
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oracle200 In reply to ShadowRavenAMZ [2010-01-03 06:34:15 +0000 UTC]
Sorry My time is being eaten by 2 AP courses, and when I do have free time it just slips my mind...
But I'll keep trying!
Heh, by the way, "wherefore" means "why". Juliet is asking why Romeo came to her house while their families are feuding.
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ShadowRavenAMZ In reply to oracle200 [2010-01-03 18:59:56 +0000 UTC]
yeah, I remember learning that in English class, but it's still fun to say
Krisin: Um. . .I miss you, so I stole--I mean, got you this severed head--I mean flower! *holds out flower thats mysteriously dripping with blood*
SRAMZ: Shes still sort of new at the whole 'love' thing
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oracle200 In reply to ShadowRavenAMZ [2010-01-03 21:30:55 +0000 UTC]
Oh, I feel pretty stupid for calling you out on that, then...
Grey: Oh... It's beautiful... The gore really adds a nice touch...
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ShadowRavenAMZ In reply to oracle200 [2010-01-03 23:47:49 +0000 UTC]
naw, its fine XD!
Krisin: ^////^;
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