Closs [2006-09-01 10:42:03 +0000 UTC]

sie gut.

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Robbeknol [2006-04-25 17:21:21 +0000 UTC]

For the first time I got close to getting what a woman goes through every month...

Ofcourse I will never truely get it, but thanks to this poëm my girlfriend is gonna get spoiled next "regular occurrence".

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the-beastie [2005-09-14 20:45:41 +0000 UTC]

Oh, I know that feeling alright. Excellent imagery, this is a great little poem - very alive with detail and intensity. Good stuff!

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fishstyx [2005-08-30 13:44:00 +0000 UTC]

Ah, dysmenorrhea...
where would we be without you?

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sullensinuous [2005-08-28 22:44:08 +0000 UTC]

i love that you managed to write about this without using words that could just be immediately linked to the topic. "blood" or "pills" for example. and it makes me ever so glad to be male!

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OracleGlass [2005-08-28 09:43:56 +0000 UTC]

YES! Thank you! So happy somebody likes it, lol. Its funny though how euphemistic we refer to it, hu? "regular orcurrence" nice one *giggle*
(BTW intensitiy achieved cause written during "waiting for the drugs to work"-phase )

As for leakening...hmpf I just used this way as it makes the line flow better but you're right its not a regular word (totally slipped my notice lol)...leaking is to short..need to find some other word obviously. hmm hmmmmm

Anyway thanks so much for commenting. I will think it through once and try to improve that line.

x Ella

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jaedin [2005-08-28 05:02:09 +0000 UTC]

Wow. What an interesting spin on a regular occurrence. I dig the intensity on this one. I am confused by 'leakening'. I am not sure if you mean leaking or something else. Other than that this is a great read and something I know I can relate to. Great work!

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