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orangetot — At My Signal
Published: 2003-08-01 11:34:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 100; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Description I’ve said all I have to say and so have you.
Yet there’s something I feel I must scream
That would make the seas swell, the sky tremble,
And you understand.
There’s one more word left inside me
And I fear it’s all I have.
But I doubt the waters and heavens need worry,
Because even when there’s not a drop of my blood left in my veins,
Even when there’s not a glimmer of vision for me,
When not a single thing I whisper will be heard,
I still won’t tell.
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Comments: 6

polyhymnia [2003-10-01 19:02:49 +0000 UTC]

Oooh, I like it. Intriguing. Boy, everybody who's read this must really want to know what it was you have to say...

Nice work!

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orangetot In reply to polyhymnia [2003-10-01 19:17:00 +0000 UTC]

Haha - anyone who knows me knows its safer not to ask. A certain few especially.
Thanks though

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badblokebob [2003-09-04 15:45:42 +0000 UTC]

I like the feeling of leaving [I presume] a relationship behind with the upper hand -- you're telling the other person you have something left to say, but never telling them what, just so that you hang in their memory and forever torment them. That's my interpretation, anyway

(Nice work, btw )

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orangetot In reply to badblokebob [2003-09-04 15:51:15 +0000 UTC]

Kind of. i think that would be the point if said person could care less, but as they don't its about me being bitter
Nice to know this one is clearer though.
Thanks

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skribbledot [2003-08-14 20:41:47 +0000 UTC]

I don't know whether I should be commenting on the poem or how I feel after having read it. I prefer the latter.

This poem, the sentiment - is so akin to how I feel and how I'm sure everyone must feel at times. The amount of times I wanted to say something to hurt, to remind of indescribable painful experiences. We all have our boundaries to what we can say or do and I can only attribute that to lack of want to push people over the edge and to cause the worst possible infliction.

The poem itself is written terribly beautifully, almost as if the emotion itself has scribed itself showing yet again, the tremendous talent of the author.

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jo-kr [2003-08-01 12:44:50 +0000 UTC]

Emotional and intruiqing. (sp) I like the way this is written, runs together very well.

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