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Published: 2003-11-25 15:25:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 84; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 15
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Description This is for him
As always
With love,
A quiet admission
Of a delicate truth,
That isn't right
Or complete
But absolute
And years too late.

But it's so quiet here without him.
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Comments: 10

citizenerazed [2003-11-29 01:06:08 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful, honest, very well written.

If it was any longer it'd just be pointlessly fleshed out

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orangetot In reply to citizenerazed [2003-11-29 11:04:52 +0000 UTC]

Aww, thanks
I'm not for padding, but some people like lengthy pieces they can get their teeth into - i always worrying i'll be frowned on for being simplistic

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diddioz [2003-11-25 19:14:30 +0000 UTC]

i really like this one. its to the point, it flows, its beautiful.

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orangetot In reply to diddioz [2003-11-25 21:47:29 +0000 UTC]

thanks i'm worried my shortness will annoy people soon. but for now at least you dont mind and can see me in all i try to say.

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searchingforsomethin [2003-11-25 18:14:36 +0000 UTC]

wow.. you are so great.
i love it.!
but i like everything you write!
so much depth and always thought provoking. you never write about stupid things, always that which is closest to your heart (well thats the way it seems) and thats what makes your stuff good. thats what makes your stuff good in my eyes! id quote a part and tell you how much i liked it but then id have to quote the whole thing because the whole thing is really good! Its short but length means nothing. you got your point across precisely.

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orangetot In reply to searchingforsomethin [2003-11-25 21:45:46 +0000 UTC]

wow - you made me blush. i thought that this piecewouldnt be recieved very well, but so far i've only heard positive things. i really appreciate that you try to understand _why_ i write these rather than just how many counts to a line of something. i'm glad they speak to you as they speak to me.

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pachunka [2003-11-25 17:24:32 +0000 UTC]

Yummy. You have a stray 'to' instead of 'too' t'ward the end.

I don't think I read it slowly enough first time- which is a shame, I would've liked for this to fully hit me first time- but it's all good- it goes deeper every time I read it. Yum.

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orangetot In reply to pachunka [2003-11-25 21:43:16 +0000 UTC]

Aww, you are a kind thing. i'll change the mistake, thanks for pointing it out. I honestly thought people would hate this - its something of ntohing (for the reader, not me) but i just had to put it up - it means something too me. so your yum is smile worthy

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iggie300 [2003-11-25 15:29:47 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow ... I just went over a rough spot in my relationship and it looked so much like the end of everything ... I know how ya feel ...

*takes random look at your gallery*

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orangetot In reply to iggie300 [2003-11-25 15:58:25 +0000 UTC]

Nice to know i got my point across. Thanks for your comment, makes me smile

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