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Published: 2003-07-30 17:38:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 129; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 5
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If there weren’t tears on my faceAnd if I wasn’t fighting to breathe
You wouldn’t know
So don’t call me a liar,
I’ve told you all I feel.
It doesn’t get better than this,
Be my guest to try.
But I’ll always be here for you,
Waiting for you at the bottom,
I’ll wait to catch you
And hold you down.
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Comments: 4
fleeet [2018-06-06 20:49:51 +0000 UTC]
I hope you are well, that your life is wonderful and that you are happy. I genuinely do.
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diddioz [2003-10-15 03:14:27 +0000 UTC]
very nice piece...good job
did u mean to say "liar" and not "lair"?
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orangetot In reply to diddioz [2003-10-15 08:02:43 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for pointing that out. All changed
This isnt one of my favourite pieces, but i dont think it's one of my worst. It said what i needed it to say which is probably the most important thing for me.
Thanks for the comment
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changwufe1 [2003-07-30 17:45:24 +0000 UTC]
its an interesting piece, i dont think i have ever been in that situation before, so i cant really relate to it. cool all the same
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