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orangetot — Rose Hip and Carnations
Published: 2003-10-13 16:33:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 80; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 6
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Description I never expected your final touch
To be the final blow in this fight.
But then I never read the stars
Trapped in the last pages
Or saw our touching fierceness
That you wouldn’t speak
And I haven’t written.

My fall is incredible
But isn’t everything we do?
Flooded in the smoke of burning
Rose hip and carnations
I can see your love,
Old and twisted,
Ten thousand leagues above me.
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Comments: 5

pachunka [2003-10-16 15:03:25 +0000 UTC]

Bloody hell that's cool. I was a little bit gobsmacked after the first few lines, so I'm not certain I took in the middley bit fully, but I know what I loved the start and the end. I wanna read more.. but I wanna get the hell out of this lab.. 'tis driving me bad..

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orangetot In reply to pachunka [2003-10-16 15:29:28 +0000 UTC]

You are a lovely person - You just made me smile

Thanks for reading i'll check your stuff out, but not while i'm at work *acts busy for boss*

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pachunka In reply to pachunka [2003-10-16 15:03:49 +0000 UTC]

*so I'll be back to read more. Cursed itchy submittey finger.

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diddioz [2003-10-13 18:02:49 +0000 UTC]

wonderful wonderful... one of my favorites from u...Rose hip and carnations ... excellent word choice.

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orangetot In reply to diddioz [2003-10-13 18:07:07 +0000 UTC]

thankyou
Word choices always sound better when they mean something, dont you think so?

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