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orangetot — Song for the Lovers
Published: 2002-08-31 11:04:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 122; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 11
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Description What bothers me is that you're singing words to a different song.
Reciting my sins in a twisted rhyme.
Well.
No one asked you to touch that deep
No one asked you to play that shallow.
But you did.
And it must've stung.
You see, I thought I'd hurt you before,
But I've never made you scream like that.
In this brave new world
In this room where insanity is kept
In this pause for breath,
Why wont you just ask?
I'll tell you the song,
And you will sing my words
And you can start screaming
All
Over
Again.
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Comments: 2

polyhymnia [2003-08-30 18:33:02 +0000 UTC]

Now you're really creeping me out

That sends shivers up my spine. I love the way you've written this - it's creepy, and edgy and conjures up scenes and characters in my mind. I love the line: "Reciting my sins in a twisted rhyme." Wonderful!

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orangetot In reply to polyhymnia [2003-09-01 20:35:47 +0000 UTC]

Aww, fankyou!
I like this one - it oozes bitterness, something i tend to feel I tried to add some sexual undertones and it ended up being creepy. hehe

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