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Published: 2003-11-30 19:10:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 83; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 11
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Overrated anywayI let myself burn
Then with
Now without
My fire
That loved me
Now forgotten
My want
Was gifted
Now unanswered
My cries
Could keep you
Now misheard
My life
Overrated anyway
I let myself burn
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Comments: 5
I really like this. It's like a lot of your work - honest and meaningful. Although most of your stuff isn't abstract.
Anyway, I really like it.
OST beat me to a poetic reply, but I think I could come up with one.
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Aww, i'm gald you see the honesty.
I put it in abstract because i'm at a loss where to put it - what would you suggest?
It's strange, i seem to be literary inspiration today
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It works fine in abstract
I wish I had days like that, though...
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underrated internaly
you let yourself burn
still with
but changed with it
still burning
but with a different fuel
and unrealised
still wanting
and always gifted
just unopened
your cries fell on deaf ears
but I hear them still
your life
underrated still
I'll put you out
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