HOME | DD
Published: 2007-12-14 00:21:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 520; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 3
Redirect to original
Description
Page 1Related content
Comments: 6
Caretaker-of-Myth [2007-12-14 02:55:13 +0000 UTC]
If this is what I am beginning to imagine it might be, it is exactly what I want right now. Keep it coming. The only real critique I could think of so far would be my personal opinion that Papyrus font should be avoided--it's too recognizable and doesn't seem to fit.
Like the "I love you" at the end; unexpected. But the second line is my favorite so far, because I'm being presumptuous. Repetition of "Where am I?" is nice too.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
OrelComics In reply to Caretaker-of-Myth [2007-12-14 15:04:28 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, I'll take note of that
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Vladimiravich [2007-12-14 02:24:43 +0000 UTC]
Wohh... Sounds like you got your self a creepy start!!! It kinda reminds me of some scenes from the Evengelion Manga.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
OrelComics In reply to Vladimiravich [2007-12-14 15:27:34 +0000 UTC]
Guess which was the inspiration
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Vladimiravich In reply to OrelComics [2007-12-14 23:21:09 +0000 UTC]
I only got the chance to read Volume 6 so I really dont know. Only ones that I do know are, the one where Shinji is cleaning the stairs at his school and looking out the window thinking philisophical thoughts until Toji wacks him on the head with a broom. The second is in "Der Mond" (The Evengelion Art book) were there is a mini colored comic of Shinji in the Eva for the first time. He starts thinking philisophical thoughts before they launch the Eva.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0























