HOME | DD
Original-Blue — TCP: Scene 16 - P1
Published: 2011-09-08 01:32:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 3861; Favourites: 44; Downloads: 0
Redirect to original
Description
Cover: [link]Page 2: [link]
Page 1 of the scene where Daine falls off a cliff.
Edit: added all the fussy details.
Edit2: Colors are done! Now to wait for my orders concerning text.
Edit3: Finally fixed the sky.
Edit4: Text! Yay!
This page is finally done!
Related content
Comments: 14
How.......i wish you could teach me how you did this.......it's amazing..........
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
this is my favorite excerpt out of all of them...no lie
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
You redid the panel! It looks awesome. Much, much more attention getting and those speedlines are quite effective. This is fabulous.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Of course! I really want to thank you for pointing that out, otherwise I might have ignored that panel.
Thanks! 
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
You're welcome! I try to be constructive when I leave comments on other people's artwork, because that's always what I like to receive. I'm glad you thought it was helpful. :]
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
That second to last panel is a little flat. I wouldn't say redraw it (since you spent all that time and energy making everything so goshdarn BEAUTIFUL), but give Numy a little more of an expression on his face - he looks kinda blank for a guy getting grabbed by a rock.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
My suggestion- make her thumb in the last panel darker, so it doesn't look quite so much like an extra-long chin overlapped by the bowstring.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Thanks, I took your advice.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
