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Published: 2007-06-18 03:17:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 128; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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A Secret Window,maybe it'll hold secrets.
maybe it'll hold adventure.
maybe it'll be an escape.
An Escape,
from all this emptiness.
from all this loneliness.
from all the farms, and crops, and cows, and pigs.
My own little secret window.
I'll sit and wonder what it's there for.
I'll sit and imagine the adventure.
Then adventure of a country girl,
escaping the empty,
escaping reality.
--from my recent literature deviation.
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Comments: 8
XaizX [2007-06-24 12:43:49 +0000 UTC]
wow. this reminds me of the movie of the same title. though,. i havent seen it yet. lol.
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original-nerd In reply to XaizX [2007-06-24 22:09:37 +0000 UTC]
Yes, it reminds me of it as well. It's a great movie, and in it..the house is about the same color as that barn in the photo so it matches quite well .
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XaizX In reply to original-nerd [2007-06-25 08:16:07 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I've heard. I am gonna watch that someday. Hehe. Ohh, really... ^^
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caiere [2007-06-19 03:32:14 +0000 UTC]
This is nice. I like how everything complemented and contrasted each other. Good job though.
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original-nerd In reply to caiere [2007-06-19 04:09:20 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, and thanks for the as well.
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rebeldork [2007-06-18 05:39:07 +0000 UTC]
Lovely poem and great picture! I love the framing of the barn and the mutedness of the colors. I also like the contrast between the red and green, and the different shapes - straight against bumpy and asymetrical. Great work!
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