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OrionsOuterLimits — A Tale To Astonish Final Chapter 01
Published: 2018-05-07 19:41:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 121; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 5
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"You too," Calamity demanded, turning to Callous. Who suddenly struck her across her face."Calamity," Callous said softly as she slowly ran her hand up Calamity's cheek. "As much as I love you...," she paused to inhale deeply. "Exquisite rage. Save your anger for the real thing. He's your bait, to draw your enemies back here and crush them.)
"I Say We Should Let Him Go And Find Different Bait," Dane said in a squeaky voice.
"Nice try, boy," Callous said as she turned to him. She then stepped uncomfortably close to him inhaling deeply, "Mmm, you hate me don't you."
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Behind The Scenes
Dane: something I never understood how Did Callous Know I was the son of Zeus she’s the daughter of Amon and he’s a demon from Carthage which a long ways from Greece
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Scarlet: Well, depending on which Amon you're talking about. Amon is just one of many names we call him, some just call him Demon of Wrath, to which he's not a demon at all, but an Archdevil, that's why others call him by a more well know name. Satan. He was one of the first to fall with Lucifer. He along with Mammon, Asmodeus, Leviathan, Beelzebub, and Belphegor are the first devils. That's why we call them the Seven.
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Dane: they sound like a nice bunch a dick heads
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Talia (walking in): As for how Callous was able to tell you were the son of Zeus. (sits down beside Salina) I think that was more you underestimating her intelligence, (shrugs) no offence. She's the one who built that place, organized your kidnapping, kept everyone in check basically. Also, lightning in your eyes, "a little gift from Olympus", come on it doesn't take a genius to figure it out.
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Dane: I just assumed she would think I was blessed by Olympus or something it’s not like most people can tell if someone’s a Demi God on a normal basis then again though Callous isn’t most people
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Talia: No, she wasn't.
(On a side note, I the scenes, I'm working on giving Dane a little more of a worried expression. Just to add a little more humanity to him. I mean he was kidnapped, is still a hostage, his fiance was broken in front of him, and he is corner by two evil mistresses. One wants him dead, the other spared him only so he can suffer more later. An act of kindness for the most evil of intentions. I feel the comments or the rehearses didn't really
capture how dire his situation is. I would be pissing my pants three different shades of fear it that happened to me. I know Dane's the son of Zeus but, he's still kidnapped)
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(True enough have him be worried and sad but still angry at the right moments)
Dane: sigh I’ve held this secret for years never thought it would be revealed or that I’d have to use my powers again
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Scarlet: Accepting your powers is a part of accepting who you are, for better or worse. I used to fear my immortality seeing it as a curse, and the whole goddess of judgment something I was forced into. But after I saw what happened when I didn't do my job, I came to realize just how much responsibility I have, and it helped turn me into a leader and the woman I am today.
Salina: Also, embrace it, you're a badass, I saw what you did at the end there, with Callous. (gives him a knowing nod) You technically could've used that same power and broken out anytime, saved Suzan, and spared a whole lot of time and pain. (shrugs) But, that's in the past now.
Talia: And my sister and I might not have had a change of heart.
Salina (sighs): Gods work in mysterious ways, I tell ya.
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Dane: sigh yeah a lot of that is true also I actually couldn’t have broken out of those restraints they where very strong you’d have to be as strong as Hercules or Thor to bust out of them I might be a Demi God but I’m peak level strength like say Perseus
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