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oron-kevin — the main boss character

Published: 2006-05-19 09:46:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 62; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 9
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Description oh god i finaly did it!! the main boss character.

the main boss character:
he is the one that broke the balance and now he is the powerful man alive.
he use to work at the palace, but something happend there and he was forced to leave and now he is driving by revenge and something else.
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Comments: 10

Underground-S [2006-05-22 00:50:18 +0000 UTC]

nice boss, I can't wait to see how you apply this

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oron-kevin In reply to Underground-S [2006-05-22 07:31:23 +0000 UTC]

thanks!! i still have some work to do on this guy and some more characters to make so it will be a while untile i'm done

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Underground-S In reply to oron-kevin [2006-05-23 02:30:50 +0000 UTC]

I feel ya, I'm going through the same thing right now

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Chymaera [2006-05-19 17:55:58 +0000 UTC]

well i dont know for what purpose youre gonna use this pic, if its a low-resolution game or smth like that its quite good, because the thumb is concentrated enough... but eaven in that case you should tweak the proportions a bit.... i mean the ass is way to large for a guy, especially for a warrior-guy....

and if youre intending to use it as it is shown in full view.... than you have a problem.... first of all the edges of the parchment (i thats what you intended it to be) dont seem torn at all.... they dont eaven seem broken,,,, just plain polygonal-lasso-tool-ized (if thats what you used), secondly the hammer looks quite crappy, i mean its not at all menacing, just plain dull (try making it more edgy), and that red thing you've put there, dosnt quite resemble blood (blood dosnt leave light-red, shiny stains, it leaves dark brown mate stains).... than the hand wich is stretching out.... well the fingers are too thin and dont have any gesture/feeling displayed..... and the flare is also very dull.... try creating a flame effect or something.... than the skin.... well at least youve got the color and shadows right..... but.... neah.... dosnt look very well either, it needs texture..... (i mean ffs, he aint a woman with shiny uniform skin)...... and the tatoo dosnt have any texture/integration either.... it looks as if it was just placed there.... maybe try giving it a burnt-in effect (glowing edges in photoshop should do the trick)....

these are the main problems.... although the rest aint perfect try solving that ( ^ ) first .....

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oron-kevin In reply to Chymaera [2006-05-20 18:24:59 +0000 UTC]

wow this is some comment u have here well there are 3 things u need to know:

1.this isn't a done work i'm still working on it i still have a lot of work to do on this guy let's call this an undone work.
2.this is going to be a animeted thingy not a game hehe i don't know how to make a game.
3.when u will see the done character then we talk

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Chymaera In reply to oron-kevin [2006-05-20 23:24:37 +0000 UTC]

since it was under deviations i thought it was finished.... if its unfinished you should have put it under "scraps" .... anyway.... hope youll take what ive written above into consideration when you start finishing this

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Petra0 [2006-05-19 14:37:47 +0000 UTC]

Cool! I like the texture in the background!

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oron-kevin In reply to Petra0 [2006-05-19 15:38:05 +0000 UTC]

thanks!! yeah it's cool

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brandnewyork20 [2006-05-19 09:46:56 +0000 UTC]

i like it man, very stylish

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oron-kevin In reply to brandnewyork20 [2006-05-19 09:48:24 +0000 UTC]

why thank u!!

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