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Ortheius — Blame Physics
Published: 2006-07-11 01:10:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 453; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 7
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Description When I say I love you
I don’t really love you
I love the way you make me feel
The chemical reactions you produce in my brain
It drives me insane the way you… smell
It’s so subconscious and subtle
Except when it’s gone
It’s all I notice
Like a black hole
Absorbing all other thoughts but you
Reminding me every moment how
You don’t make me feel
Something in my brain clicked
I’ve smelled your smell once too many
I don’t get the same rush I used to
You don’t make me feel
Love anymore
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Comments: 9

crazed-mongolian [2006-07-21 23:24:26 +0000 UTC]

It's awesome! I love the weird humor...certainly a favorite.

*steals your poem-writing skills*

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Ortheius In reply to crazed-mongolian [2006-07-27 18:12:05 +0000 UTC]

*gwafaw* aww shucks! thanks!

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NellieStar [2006-07-12 18:59:07 +0000 UTC]

i think that tjhis is like amazingly good!

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xThe-xObserver [2006-07-12 17:28:53 +0000 UTC]

wonderful. and true. have i ever told you that i love you? <3

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Notiri [2006-07-12 02:34:22 +0000 UTC]

I likes the last part.
I heart Lou Lou even though I couldn't go to Raya's cabin with her

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Swarm901 [2006-07-11 03:20:48 +0000 UTC]

Are you relating to endorphins : 'The chemical reactions you produce in my brain' or emotions? Either way, great poem!

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Ortheius In reply to Swarm901 [2006-07-13 00:49:13 +0000 UTC]

Emotions... or a cross between both. Do you what I mean? I hope because I don't know how else to explane it...

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Swarm901 In reply to Ortheius [2006-07-13 03:44:07 +0000 UTC]

Ah, I see. Much clearer now, thanks!

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spitfire06 [2006-07-11 01:12:09 +0000 UTC]

ooo its very good the way love is to me too.. heh

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