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Osha-Briefs — The Execution

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Lentil kept his green eyes locked on his prince as the crowd around him erupted with cries of outrage and vengeance. He had been stripped of all his clothing and shackles adorned his wrists and neck. Merely for show, Lentil had been put inside of a large cage. Were it not for the numbers that circled the cage closely, the young saiyan could have escaped his bondage with minimal difficulty. His long fire-red hair spilled down his back and over his shoulders. The prisoner had already undergone several forms of torture and that was apparent on his abused body.

Prouts stood still in the crowd, one of the few who weren’t adding to the ruckus. He was beside the empress, where she had ordered him to stand. His stone face was unreadable and no emotion betrayed itself in his eyes. He kept his teeth clenched tightly together to fight back the feeling of nausea that was threatening to overtake him. It was one of the laws proclaimed by the demonic ruler: the entire saiyan colony was required to attend public executions, and anyone who tried to interfere with the execution would also be killed. Every fiber in Prouts’ being screamed at him to do something, but there was nothing he could do to stop it. His best, most loyal friend was to be killed.

The prince scanned the crowd, hoping and dreading to spot the face of Lentil’s pregnant wife, Aubergine, amid the collection of what remained of his starving people. She was there somewhere, but (with a small, guilty degree of relief) he didn’t see her. Perhaps his twin had managed to find her and was with her for support.

“SILENCE! HER EMPRESS, LADY SHEGAU IS ABOUT TO BEGIN!” A number with pumpkin-orange hair bellowed.

The saiyans became quiet more out of fear then respect. Lentil continued to watch Prouts as her majesty stood up and sent a cold smile his way. Dust swirled around her feet, and her long elegant cape draped behind her onto the ground.

“I would like you all to gaze at this creature here before you. I call him a creature for he is not one of us.” She began, addressing the crowd in a commanding tone. “This traitor was caught in the act of an unpardonable crime! He has stolen more than five times his ration—from all of you.”

The saiyans roared in fury. Many picked up rocks and threw them at the caged saiyan. Lentil wanted to shout out to the crowd he was innocent—that he had been framed. The accusations were not true. Both he and his accusers knew he was not responsible for what he was being charged. It was true that he stole food, but it was for Aubergine and he only took small portions. He was always very careful. Everyone on the moon stole—it was the only way to get enough to eat! In the dead of night, he had run across one of the numbers, who gave him the food. It was fact that the numbers had more food than anyone else so Lentil hadn’t questioned it. Little did he know where the food had come from.

Mentally cursing himself for his stupidity, he looked to his prince. It was no use proclaiming his innocents to the host of wretched saiyans. They didn’t want truth, they wanted someone to blame and in the hell they lived in, they could hardly be blamed. His pleas would fall on deaf ears.

“This,” Shegau continued, “is a crime only death will justify!”

Prouts kept his face resolutely blank. Lentil had his eyes fixed on him, but what did he expect?! Prouts had told him time and again to not get caught—to stop stealing altogether!—but Lentil had kept up, in spite of Prouts’ entreaties!

‘Damn it, Lentil! WHY did you have to go and get yourself caught?! WHY?!’

If he could have, Prouts would have run to that abominable cage and torn it to pieces, then fight off anyone who tried to stop him but there were too many. All of the numbers were present, in addition to the blood-lusting mob and Shegau herself. Prouts simply didn’t stand a chance.

Shegau circled around, thoroughly enjoying the whole affair. Enhancing her pleasure was the knowledge that this would kill her darling prince just as much as it would kill his pet. “As an example to him, and any others that dare trespass the laws that have been put into effect, he will be punished before you now.”

The crowd cheered. Prouts’ eye twitched spasmodically. Lentil lost all hope, but kept his gaze trained on his prince.

Shegau returned to her throne and seated herself. She stretched out her hand and let her slender fingers slide over Prouts’ arm and she purred for only him to hear, “ Pity losing a medic, isn’t it Darling? You know…. I seem to recall he was of value to you. ”

Prouts recoiled from her touch, but otherwise didn’t respond. Shegau laughed softly in her throat.

“Attack.” She ordered.

The numbers charged the cage as one mass. Lentil was wrenched violently from within the bars and flung to the ground. Numbers leapt on him mercilessly, practically fighting each other to deliver a savage blow to their unfortunate victim. Within moments sickening pops and wet cracks could be heard. Lentil screamed out in pain, “MY PRINCE! PROUTS! MY PRINCE!!”

The mob exploded into riotous commotion. Prouts could have been carved of stone. It required every degree of constraint the dark-haired prince possessed to stand so still. His teeth clamped down so hard on his tongue he tasted blood, but he didn’t dare loosen his jaw. Acidic tears burned the backs of his eyes but he refused to let them cloud his vision. He couldn’t breathe. His lungs were being crushed from the inside by an iron vice. His head became light and airy-feeling. All he could hear was his best friend’s agonized cries: His name, over and over again. He couldn’t move, if he so much as shifted his weight, he knew that he would give in to the suicidal compulsion to rush to Lentil’s side.

Lentil managed to miraculously break away from the numbers for a brief instant. With all the strength and energy he could muster, he made for Prouts. He threw out his hand, begging for help just before he was caught by the ankle and dragged back. He was spitting teeth and blood and howling like a lost soul.

Twisting a strand of hair around her finger, the empress gave a fleeting look in the young prince’s direction. As much as he was willing emotion to leave him, she could see suffering in the taut tendons of his neck and read the signs of strain in his rigid posture. Shegau was wholly impressed with Prouts’ level of self control. To stand by while the sound of breaking bones and shrieks of anguish permeated the air from a cherished loved one was an astounding feat. He was heartless— perfectly heartless! It fueled her desire to break him down. She would turn him into her compliant and docile mate; she would make a walking corpse out of him, and no one would ever again dare defy her.

“Stop.” The order from Shegau’s lips was abrupt and final. Obediantly, her dogs dropped their toy and moved away. Lentil lay in a crumpled, nearly unrecognizable heap. He was squashed and broken; a despicable mess—so far beyond repair the idea of medical attention was tragically comical. He was dying where he lay in the soiled dirt. Shegau stood again and the crowd hushed. She sauntered over to the prisoner and leered down at him. Lentil’s face was a wreck.

“As warranted, this creature has received its punishment and now, I will deliver the final blow.” She snatched his red hair in one hand and pulled him up off of the ground. The empress gathered ki and directed it to the tips of her finger nails. Then she cut across Lentil’s throat, beheading him in one swift, clean movement.

The crowd cheered.

Shegau dropped the head unceremoniously and paraded out through the crowd, trailed by her dogs. Prouts’ mind was numb and he was only half-way aware of those around him dispersing. Dusk was approaching and no one wanted to be left out in the open alone. The saiyans’ short escape from their hellish existence had ended, and they were once again vulnerable to all of the dangers of living in the moon colony. The numbers would soon be prowling the colony looking for others to torment, temperatures would drop dangerously low and there was the constant, paranoid need to protect their food. The safest place to be was home in their underground burrows.

These worries could not have been farther from Prouts’ mind. He remained where he was until the field had been cleared of everyone but himself and Lentil’s body. Time became irrelevant, it froze. He didn’t know how long he stood there, and he didn’t care in the least. Concern for his physical welfare had been snuffed out almost entirely.

His feet were heavier than he had ever felt them in his life. Slowly he walked to Lentil’s body and when he reached the body’s side, his legs gave out beneath him and he fell to his knees.

“What am I supposed to do now?!” He demanded of the dead young man, “WHAT AM I GOING TO DO?! You idiot, why did you get caught?! I told you to stop stealing! I would have given you my food—ALL OF IT! Lentil you said you would serve me! HOW CAN YOU SERVE ME IF YOU ARE DEAD?!”

Prouts’ wall broke down and he put his face in the dirt, sobbing like a child. “You were just as much my brother as Troups! And what about Aubergine?! What about her, what will she and your pup do without you?! How dare you get caught? Lentil we need you—I NEED YOU! You can’t leave me…what am I supposed to do now?”

The prince said no more. He lay huddled in the dust, taking deep breaths trying to regain some composer. After a good deal of time, Prouts sat up and looked at the gristly remains of his friend. He had to bury him, there were no more time for tears. A glint caught Prouts’ eye as he moved to pick up Lentil.

Lentil wore a pair of earrings. One of the gold spheres had been completely destroyed in the onslaught of numbers, but its mate was still intact, though it was cracked. Prouts reached out and took it from Lentil’s ear, piercing it through his own.

“You owe me a memento, at the very least.”


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Lentil was/is Prouts' closets childhood friend. Prouts views Lentil as a member of his family, and loves him very deeply. Losing Lentil very nearly destroyed Prouts, but that is a story for another time. This event is very significant in the horrid blackness that is Prouts' past. It changed Prouts, Troups and Ebet's lives forever and set the ball rolling towards their freedom actually. Prouts was ready to give into Shegau's demands, and be her mate, but Troups interviened and ended up taking Prouts' place instead. Prouts snapped out of it, coming back to himself and devising a plan to escape the hell they lived in. Ultimately, Lentil's execution saved them. But it was not a sacrifice that the Prouts ever fully recoverd from. Even after Lentil was wished back, Prouts still harbored a deep guilt for his best friend's death and it is unlikely he will completely forgive himself.

Hooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo, wow that submission took me forever!! Hope you all liked the one-shot. I spent time and thought on it.

Okay, so a few things to mention: 1) Yes, that is the back of Kimpun's head over Shegau's shoulder--he is her most loyal dog, after all. 2)The design for this image was inspired by a Full Metal Alchemist poster I saw, but you'd never guess, they hardly look alike. [ [link] ] . 3) I was playing with cell-shading in this pic. I like how it turned out, but I will continue to work on it. I curse my art program, but it is better than nothing....

That is it folks ^w^


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Comments: 48

BlackKusanagi [2010-09-21 18:27:52 +0000 UTC]

Some deep stuff. Nicely done.

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Osha-Briefs In reply to BlackKusanagi [2010-09-23 07:02:08 +0000 UTC]

Oh! Thank you ^w^

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BlackKusanagi In reply to Osha-Briefs [2010-09-23 07:20:21 +0000 UTC]

No problem Osha.

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friendshipisfiction [2010-01-16 06:46:42 +0000 UTC]

isso sad and loverly ;-;

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Osha-Briefs In reply to friendshipisfiction [2010-01-17 03:56:34 +0000 UTC]

Daaww, thanks. Yeah, its supposed to be horribly sad. What can I say, I'm a horrible character mommy >u<;

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friendshipisfiction In reply to Osha-Briefs [2010-01-17 04:44:29 +0000 UTC]

no worse than me since my poor leeky has been raped to death and then abandoned by her "arranged marriage" would-be mate ^^....and then dumped y 3 other guys after that ^^....oh wht other mental traumas could i give her...hmm..*goes down a list of personality disorders*

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Osha-Briefs In reply to friendshipisfiction [2010-01-17 07:19:52 +0000 UTC]

Yup, I understand!

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friendshipisfiction In reply to Osha-Briefs [2010-01-18 02:24:15 +0000 UTC]

but sometimes....it;s sooooo much fun to abuse them ^^ *giggles wickedly*

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Osha-Briefs In reply to friendshipisfiction [2010-01-19 01:50:21 +0000 UTC]

Idn't it? ^u^ *wiggles*

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friendshipisfiction In reply to Osha-Briefs [2010-01-19 03:36:13 +0000 UTC]

*giggle-gaggles extaticly* too bad i had too much fun with leeky;s bio since iris said it was too dark and not generalized and scared her a bit ^^

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Osha-Briefs In reply to friendshipisfiction [2010-01-20 16:13:37 +0000 UTC]

lolz, sounds intense!

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friendshipisfiction In reply to Osha-Briefs [2010-01-20 16:44:09 +0000 UTC]

well i did have to tweak it just a tad to fit in with the numbers contest ^^ ..but only just a tad...

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Sensei-Briefs [2009-07-28 22:39:07 +0000 UTC]

I still hate the Blond bimbo that needed to die, im glad shes dead, poor Lentil, he shouldn't have died, he was too cool. Still love!!!

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Osha-Briefs In reply to Sensei-Briefs [2009-07-28 23:09:21 +0000 UTC]

Yeah! Poor Lentil really shouldn't have died. The Sea-Cow framed him. I love to hate her.

^w^ Glad you like the pic so much.

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Rushstarfire [2009-07-06 20:54:55 +0000 UTC]

Wow this must have taken FOREVER. Its really really good. Very impressed. great job on composition, inking, color scheme and shading. I might of made prouts a little bigger if you wanted attention to be drawn on him because it seems like he is a major player in this scene but that is probably just a matter of opinion or maybe its lentil's eye that leads you off the page. I don't know. I think you have done a great job at cell shading and getting the hang of it really well. I also like the highlights on prout's armor. I like how the color scheme is loosely based on prout- reds blues and yellows with some variation. I agree that the emotions are expressed well on the character's faces. good job on the cage's shadow across lentil's face that is just super awesome. Any yeah... sorry took so long to comment

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Osha-Briefs In reply to Rushstarfire [2009-08-07 00:37:51 +0000 UTC]

It did take forever. >_> Blech, I got sick of working on it more then once.

I'm glad you that you like it! Thank you!

I wanted Prouts to be smaller, because I wanted to convey how the situation it much bigger than him and out of his control >w< (I'm so mean!)

Don't even worry about it! Thank you for commenting! I love when friends comment on my work. *Wiggles* You are awesome! Hope everything is going well for you.

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Rushstarfire In reply to Osha-Briefs [2009-09-08 03:09:18 +0000 UTC]

now that you say that it makes a lot of sense. cause you do get that feeling. thank you! see you soon!

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IrisHime [2009-06-20 17:12:40 +0000 UTC]

HOKAY BUDDY, I figure that since I posted my first AatR ref, I can take a minute of my time to finally comment. Like I promised you I would. ;]

First of all; it's FREAKING AMAZING. I LOVE how all of the colors turned out together; because of Lentil's hair and the red sky and the skin and everything, I was worried that it was going to turn out very "red" heavy. But Shegau and Prouts (and a few of the Saiyans in the crowd) help to even it out with all their blue tones. It looks very "even" and well balanced, both color and composition wise. I've LOVED this drawing since I first saw the sketch for it.♥♥♥

Nextly, I love all of the expressions. My goodness, There is so much behind all of their faces. Lentil's hopeless "dead" expression, Prouts' refusal to allow his emotions to betray him at all, and Shegau, with that horrid, haughty, snide expression. Knowing exactly what she's doing, and yet tormenting Prouts all the more by pretending that she does not. What a ho-bag.
I think my favorite expression is Lentil's though. I'm just in love with it. I know that Prouts was giving you a hard time though (because he didn't want to be drawn into this situation, lol) but he also came out great as well. I'd almost say that he looks too "angry" but at the same time, knowing him, when he's "blank" he DOES look angry. His face is just so sharp. So yeah, considering that it's him; even though he gave you trouble, he looks perfect as well. And I'm glad that I could help with his pose, even though I hate being used for a model for one of YOUR drawings while *I'M* trying to draw too! buuuuut it was worth it to say that I got to be a part of this I guess (I helped! I helped!! : D). The ridgedness in his posture is clearly evident with the high shoulders and the curl of his hand. He looks so very "tight". Prouts' emotions are seen strictly through his body language here... which has always been the case, hasn't it?
And you have to have a love-hate relationship with how Shegau came out. She looks so perfectly... her. The way she has her nose upturned and the curl of her lips the slack of her eye and the arch of her brow. Everything about her is completely true to her character... but that's what makes it so infuriating, huh? |D Really though, good job with her eye and her nose. And both her and Lentil's hair came out great. Combine with Prouts' cape, they add a certain "flow" to the image.
The ONLY think I have to nit-pick over the line-art about is Lentil's eye-brow; unlike real eye-brows, Toriyama's are thinner at the beginning and thicker at the end. It looks perfect the way it is, but stylistically it's just incorrect is all ;] BUT HEY, OUR ATTEMPTS AT TORIYAMA'S STYLE ARE BOTH STYLIZED TO WHAT THE HELL!! XD

The shading of the image is all simply fantastic. the cool colors that you chose to shade with also help to tone the image down and give it a "cool" feel despite being so many "warm" colors being used. My favorite things ever are Prouts' tail, the shackles around Lentil, and the lines of the bars across his face; and this is all because of how the shading is done. Really, the way that the shadows of the bars look as they play across his face is so cool. tragic, but cool. |D

Lastly; The sky looks beautiful, and I LOVE the crowd of Saiyans in the background. When I first saw it in my inbox and clicked on it I was surprised to see the "crowd" in the BG. I didn't expect it at all. You did a great job!! Even though they are kind of far away and blurred out, I LOVE all of the designs and colors. They look great!! : D
I really like the girl with green skin and tan hair, and the tall Saiyan male next to the child; he looks like he could be Nipturn's father. XD
I also like the black-haired female with the bright green leotard. They all look so cool!! : D they are such cool designs. I want to use them!! *shot* (like we don't have enough characters) BUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUT They're spiffy and unique designs!! ; A ;
You really are good with background characters. People who don't matter. Unless they're the main character, I never know what to do with the people in the background, and so they look all shitty and un-detailed because I can't be bothered to figure out designs for them. e_e;;;; You've always been better than me about that.

All in all: I am simply amazed by this piece and think it's definitely one of if not your very best illustrations yet. GREAT JOB BUDDY!!!!

Now; as for the one shot.
Beautifully written. I know that you let me read it before, but I had totally forgotten about it. Or at least, forgotten how tragic it was, and how well-written. It is an excellent one shot, even without the illustration. It conveys a GREAT deal of emotion, and covers a HUUUUGE ground of events with as much depth and little drag as possible; I tend to drag on about events that aren't necessary AS important to the event as I tend to think that they are...
When combine with the picture however, the two make a very moving statement. Poor, poor Lentil. I feel so sorry for him. Both he and Prouts. But damn, the pain that he must have felt right before the end of his life... it's a terrible thing to think about. *hugs Lentil* ; ^ ; all of their lives were so tragic back then. I'm glad that they are all happier now. c:
Really, when you think about it, even though he doesn't like feeling so "confined" to Earth, the planet must feel like paradise to him in compare.

I love this picture Osh, I really, really do. you did a FANTASTIC SUPER DUPER AMAZING job with it. Pat yourself on the back. I <3 it. ^__^

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IrisHime In reply to IrisHime [2009-06-20 17:18:13 +0000 UTC]

*STYLIZED SO WHAT THE HELL!! XD

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Haphazard-Witch [2009-06-15 06:40:56 +0000 UTC]

Picture:
It's gorgeous Osha! You outdid yourself with all the detail, and how the background is all tied together. How Shegau is looking at Prouts, and how the sky is shared by both. How Lentil looks so sad, sad wouldn't be the word though... I can't really think of a word that is beyond sad. I love it Osha, really love it, and I'm glad to final see the final product.

One-Shot Story:
D'8 THAT IS SAD, BEYOND SAD!!! Just the imagery you used for Shegau, I now what to bash her face in! I think it's not bad to say I enjoyed it, for I did.

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Osha-Briefs In reply to Haphazard-Witch [2009-06-15 14:07:37 +0000 UTC]

Glad you like it so much ^w^ I did work really hard, but I noticed some things I may fix, so if I ever get around to it, I may update it. Lentil's expression made me happy. He is just dead inside--and I put it on his face! >XD Prouts' flat emotionless face pleased me as well. You can tell he is holding back a reservoir of pain/anger/sadness/despair but he is refusing to show it.

GOOD! The the one-shot was effective! One of my secret motivations was to make people hate her. It was way way sad though. Welcome to Planet Vegeta's moon colony--otherwise known as hell. And the sadder part is that was only one little clip too. Prouts literally lost EVERYTHING that was precious to him on the moon. His parents were killed in front of him, he friends died right and left, Ebet was taken away, Lentil was executed in front of him, Troups hit his head and lost almost all of his memories then was (unbeknownst to Prouts) possesed by a hoard of demons, Prouts blamed himself for not being a strong enough prince to save his people, and to add insult to injury when he got to Earth he found out he wasn't the heir to the throne. Can you blame him for being a distrusting, merciless, anti-social, cold, calculating wall of ice? He made do with what life gave him.

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SonJacie [2009-06-15 01:45:35 +0000 UTC]

Holy Cow. Not only an AWESOME read, but an AWESOME picture to go with it. It's sooooo well written, the emotions are clearly stated...Just..Wow. And good work! *thumbs up*

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Osha-Briefs In reply to SonJacie [2009-06-15 02:54:59 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! ^w^ I like it. I see things I want to fix in the image, and that will happen eventually, but I just wanted to get it posted. I was sick of it sitting on my desktop. I am glad you liked it! I have to admit I am rather proud of the one-shot thing.

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SonJacie In reply to Osha-Briefs [2009-06-15 05:25:10 +0000 UTC]

Well, it's really well done. I really like Lentil in the image, he looks so sad...The oneshot was so sad...I wanted to cry. The emotions are portrayed so well. :claps:

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Osha-Briefs In reply to SonJacie [2009-06-15 13:50:44 +0000 UTC]

Yes, Lentil is just dead on the inside, he knows there is no way out for him... *hugs him* I'm sorry I am so mean to you!

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Sensei-Briefs [2009-06-14 19:35:53 +0000 UTC]

Sa-ad!!! Oh that was so sad. I wannna kill the bitch though!!! Grrr.. Great Job Osha!!

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Osha-Briefs In reply to Sensei-Briefs [2009-06-14 21:34:36 +0000 UTC]

Inorite?!! Join the Shegau-Hating Club. Only requirement is you must hate her.

Doesn't it make you feel good to know Prouts personally kills her? AND in the most satisfying way!!!! It just makes me all fuzzy inside to think about it. He totally betrays her, in front of all of her numbers and all the Earth-saiyans. Then, as proverbial icing, he also kills the remaining numbers. Trunks tried to stop him--telling him to let the numbers go, but Prouts would have none of that.

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Sensei-Briefs In reply to Osha-Briefs [2009-06-14 22:36:50 +0000 UTC]

Oooo! Where do I find it?
Good Job for Prouts, kills the bitch WOOO!! And the number Woo!!! Go Prouts!

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Osha-Briefs In reply to Sensei-Briefs [2009-06-15 02:53:11 +0000 UTC]

You talk to me, I am the president. I accept you. You are now in. Welcome to the club. Now you are expected to call 'her royal lady-empress-ness' suiting names such as Sea-cow, and exhibit all forms of hatred for her.

(Technically Prouts is the President, but seeing as I am his wife--I organize the hatred in a more spiteful, feminine way. Prouts lacks a woman's venomous touch, although he is very spiteful, vengeful and vindictive in his own right.)

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Sensei-Briefs In reply to Osha-Briefs [2009-06-20 20:11:57 +0000 UTC]

Ooo thank you for letting me in!!!

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Osha-Briefs In reply to Sensei-Briefs [2009-06-22 03:35:21 +0000 UTC]

You are so very welcome, we (meaning I) allow anyone into the club with open arms. Enjoy your stay with us(me). Have fun hating her!

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Sensei-Briefs In reply to Osha-Briefs [2009-06-22 04:04:30 +0000 UTC]

Wooo I will have fun hating here...

Sensei: *sneeks up behind her and shanks her in the ribs* HAHA!!!

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Osha-Briefs In reply to Sensei-Briefs [2009-06-22 13:11:45 +0000 UTC]

Yes!! Man, I wish that I could just kill her over and over and over again. I think Prouts would enjoy that as well.. >w<

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Sensei-Briefs In reply to Osha-Briefs [2009-06-22 18:54:46 +0000 UTC]

Me too, even though i know little about her, i still want to kill her!! GRRRRR!!! Prouts would enjoy that, from what I know if him, he definally would

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Osha-Briefs In reply to Sensei-Briefs [2009-08-08 03:24:58 +0000 UTC]

You know him well then! lolz It pleases me immensely that you hate her.

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Kaiju-Borru-Zetto [2009-06-13 08:38:15 +0000 UTC]

Guh, whoa... wha... uh... wow o _ O
I... I have no words that can really express how I feel about this image and the story beneath it.... This was just... well... Amazing O _ O

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Osha-Briefs In reply to Kaiju-Borru-Zetto [2009-06-13 19:49:19 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ^/////^

Sucks to be Prouts, huh? He is one of our most picked on characters, and not coincidentally he is also one of the toughest and most cunning. He gets lot of abuse. But I love him. In MY opinion [totally biased] he is the best of all our characters and worthy of all attention, praise and love. Unfortunately for the rest of you, he is mine and I don't share! Bwahahahahahahahahahaha!

I love Prouts <3

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Kaiju-Borru-Zetto In reply to Osha-Briefs [2009-06-13 19:56:12 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome o_o

Yeah, definitely. I remember seeing a sketch of Prouts and a beheaded Lentil a while back. That image hasn't left me brain since. I can tell he is one of your most picked on chars D: But that's what made him that tough and cunning.

I wouldn't touch him with a 10ft pole D: He scares the non-existent hell outta me D:

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Osha-Briefs In reply to Kaiju-Borru-Zetto [2009-06-13 20:02:51 +0000 UTC]

^w^

Prouts is win!!

Good. He likes it that way. It is very intentional.

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Kaiju-Borru-Zetto In reply to Osha-Briefs [2009-06-13 20:05:59 +0000 UTC]

meep

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Supersaiyanbatman [2009-06-13 05:49:11 +0000 UTC]

8D

There's nothing I can ever say bad about you and Iris' stuff, whenever you post something, even if its been months, its always worth it!

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Osha-Briefs In reply to Supersaiyanbatman [2009-06-13 19:35:32 +0000 UTC]

Aww, thank you so much! >w< You are so sweet! And now for your prize: *Pats you on the head*

Don't you feel good? You won!

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Supersaiyanbatman In reply to Osha-Briefs [2009-06-13 19:41:02 +0000 UTC]

No problem :3

ASGFGSUHGFOJS THAT WAS THE MOST AMAZING PRIZE EVAR

EXCUSE ME WHILE I GO GLOAT ABOUT MY WINNINGS

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Osha-Briefs In reply to Supersaiyanbatman [2009-06-13 20:01:31 +0000 UTC]

Wasn't it though? You are excused. ^w^

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Supersaiyanbatman In reply to Supersaiyanbatman [2009-06-13 05:53:02 +0000 UTC]

On that note, curse my tired-headache-ness.

The one shot was REALLY Fun to read, and well written too! I command everyone to read it! D<

But, Like I've said before, its always worth it waiting to see stuff from you guys, cause you don't disappoint.

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Osha-Briefs In reply to Supersaiyanbatman [2009-06-13 19:38:32 +0000 UTC]

Glad that you liked the one-shot. It is a clip out of the SB story Iris and I are working on. Someday SB might make it to the internet, but right now it is NO WHERE near done...We write really complex and ridiculous stories.....

Thanks for commenting! I'm happy you enjoyed it.

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Supersaiyanbatman In reply to Osha-Briefs [2009-06-13 19:41:18 +0000 UTC]

o A o

That sounds awesome 8D

No prob x3

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Osha-Briefs In reply to Supersaiyanbatman [2009-06-13 20:19:03 +0000 UTC]

Glad you think so ^w^. It is really sorta lame acutally--we have been developing this fan-fic for six years now, and we are only just starting to get it written down. That is why when people ask us questions about our story it take HUGE long explanations, because before we can even answer the question we have to address all the background stuff that is going on and/or things that led up to it.

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