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Published: 2009-07-25 06:51:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 3099; Favourites: 94; Downloads: 0
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It's been hella long since I've uploaded anything.Took me too long to put this together. And like most pictures I do, I can't stand looking at it anymore... If you see something "off", give me a shout -- I'd love a critique.
EDIT
This Deadpool print needs a Deadpool "Yellow Box" of awesome quotation-ness. Kindly take the time to do the poll and decide what will go on this print: [link]
Edit #2
Subtle edits based on feedback and added Mr. Yellow Box.
Deadpool (c) Marvel Comics.
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my wife said "his head looks like a chinese dumpling!"
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Yay! oh wait... no yellow boxes.
things that I see "off" and maybe that's why you feel it too:
very small shotgun and leg pouches.
the shotgun ammobelt has the foreground short and the back longer.
maybe too symmetrical in design perhaps? same length guns and same length swords in a symmetrical pose?
I rather like it as a whole, but since you wanted a critique I'm being little harsh.
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Thanks. I appreciate you taking the time to leave a critique. And it's not harsh at all.
His yellow box will be added. I'm doing a poll to decide what will go in it.
Make leg pouches larger. Fix shotgun ammo perspective sizing. All noted. Shotgun is sawed-off, do you still think it's too small?
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while beefing it up in general is good, I have the biggest problem with the barrel of the shotgun than the length.
it has the same diameter as the pistols.
I like the double barrels when they are side to side (they don't seem to make much of them anymore), but the rest of the gun makes it look like it's a shotgun with barrels on top of eachother.
it has a pump action grip with a side feeder a feature that doesn't exist for a side to side barrel shotguns.
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details like this is why I don't draw realistic/historic guns, too much copying.
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Thanks for the link. I have to admit, I didn't ref the shotgun like I should have -- which obviously explains your assessment. Thanks again for taking the time to point things out.
Drawing real guns (or any weapon for that matter) is a total pain in the butt. By far the majority of the time spent on this piece went to those weapons. Deadpool himself was basically done in a couple of hours, while the guns took almost a day each.
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