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Otakumori — Traumerei, Ch 1 Page 14
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Published: 2014-04-08 20:56:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 3084; Favourites: 61; Downloads: 3
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Woah BEN, way to be a douche.
Insult her puppy dog while you're at it.
Geez. You would think a vengeful soul would be a little bit nicer, but nope.
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Klasse! Diese Seite ist toll, ich liebe Ben!
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Why can I imagine Nightmare screaming at her computer like "BEN YOU'VE BEEN IN THEIR FOR 3 HOURS. GET OUT I NEED TO USE THAT"
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BEN I shall watch you BI *"I watch you" sign to BEN*
it's staying epic c:
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Wow...
Is that a real conversation with Cleverbot?
If so, I wanna try!
If not, oh well.
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Nah, I edited it with a text program. xD
I tried to make the conversation seem as real as possible, tho.
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What happened? What is Sam looking at? And how does Sam know BEN?
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Oh you Ben...
ofcorseweallrememberthebirdwomnright?rrriiiggghhhttt?
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NOOOOOOO!!! Cliffhanger!!!! DX
I just read through your comic, and ohmigosh I LUV IT!!! XD
I'm actually a little nervous and jumpy right now, and trust me, it takes a LOT to get me like that! I love the personalities you've given Jeff and BEN, their obviously insane and they enjoy what they do without regrets, but you also give them this sense of still being teenagers and it lets them get away with a few things (Jeff completely going ADD when he saw the Rake and BEN being a taunting ass) without making them look out of character~!!
Awesome job and keep 'em coming!! Please~!! X3
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Haha, thank you! This compliment really means a lot to me! <3
You know, when I'm writing a creepypasta character, I always try to make them likable and even somewhat relatable, but I also try to get the point across that they are, IN FACT, bloodthirsty monsters.
not like other people who twist their personalities around completely and make them tame lover boys augh
And you know what's really funny? Jeff is around 19 and BEN is 25 in this comic. xD
(but I've got the headcanon that Jeff might have a split personality thing going on and that BEN still acts like a little boy because he was drowned when he was 12 and still kept his mental age, so I... guess it's okay? I sure hope so. xD)
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You are very welcome, sweetie~ X3
And I am in complete agreement with your take on Jeff and BEN's personalities!! They ARE bloodthirsty killers, one should never forget that, but they were also human once, so they are bound to act a little human every once in a while, even if it's just for a moment. I love the idea of Jeff having a split personality, maybe his "Urge" grew its own concience? And BEN is a bit childish at times, it makes sense since he died young~
If you ever have the time, check out my fic and we can compare notes on our takes of Pasta personalities and we could exchange ideas and suggestions as well~!! X3
I love this comic, please keep it up~!! XD
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You are very welcome, sweetie~ X3
And I am in complete agreement with your take on Jeff and BEN's personalities!! They ARE bloodthirsty killers, one should never forget that, but they were also human once, so they are bound to act a little human every once in a while, even if it's just for a moment. I love the idea of Jeff having a split personality, maybe his "Urge" grew its own concience? And BEN is a bit childish at times, it makes sense since he died so young~
If you ever have the time, check out my fic and we can compare notes on our takes of Pasta personalities and we could exchange ideas and suggestions as well~!! X3
I love this comic, please keep it up~!! XD
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ooooooooohhhhhh shiiiiiiiiitttttt
great job can wait for th next
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Now that I can see it, I still don't get it. Though it looks nice. Here's what I gathered:
Girl opens up cleverbot
Cleverbot manifests Cain-Lookalike
CleverbotCain acts like a jerk
CC then sends file
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I-I need to see da proof!!!! INTENSITY INTENSIFIES!
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I know.
I hoped it would help the atmosphere a bit... Does it? :S
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Okay, good to know. I'll try to make it a little bit lighter.
Don't worry, the dark part is almost over anyway. There will be much more light after the next pages, I promise. c:
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I'm not one of your watchers, I just found this on the new Deviations page.
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Yeah, I know. xD Just wanted to tell ya that if you would want to read it further, you don't have to strain your eyes so much. Just a heads up. ^^
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thanks my eyes are already broken though
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