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Description Don't get too excited folks. This is an epilogue that will only last a few pages.

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Page 118 [link]
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zelldragon [2011-05-22 06:51:06 +0000 UTC]

and I feel bad for Yuki at this point

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otherunicorn In reply to zelldragon [2011-05-22 10:04:21 +0000 UTC]

Even Sonya feels bad for Yuki at this point!

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zelldragon In reply to otherunicorn [2011-05-22 22:44:19 +0000 UTC]

yeah, totally

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zelldragon [2011-05-22 06:50:02 +0000 UTC]

my brain is late, it hasn't clocked in for about.........(does math) 19 years, 5 months, twenty nine days, 10 hours. ........ HEY! that was my exact age!

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sailoranon72asdf [2009-10-16 06:37:42 +0000 UTC]

The links in the description appear to be wrong.
The previous link to Page 117 takes me to a submit agreement. Page 116 (the previous page) is here: [link]

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otherunicorn In reply to sailoranon72asdf [2009-10-16 11:16:09 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. Clearly my brain had gone to lunch without me.

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sailoranon72asdf In reply to otherunicorn [2009-10-21 23:11:29 +0000 UTC]

>.<
Food is important though!

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otherunicorn In reply to sailoranon72asdf [2009-10-21 23:16:27 +0000 UTC]

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tommyk66 [2009-10-15 21:17:27 +0000 UTC]

Ken -

I've followed this since about page 30 and enjoyed the entire run. I thought you ended at a logical break, but if there's more to be told, I'm all eyes. Also, I'm fascinated by the implicit multiple meanings of "Take Two" in the comic.

What do you use for the page layout?

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otherunicorn In reply to tommyk66 [2009-10-15 22:23:37 +0000 UTC]

Little "appendixes" are not uncommon in manga either. They tidy up loose threads.

For software I use photoshop 3.05. Ancient, I know, but I bought it back when it was first released, and it still does everything I need.

I am also glad that someone has realized that "Take Two" has significant and multiple meanings. I think most people miss this.

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tommyk66 In reply to otherunicorn [2009-10-16 01:28:23 +0000 UTC]

So you just create a blank page-size image and then drop the render images in to suit? Kewl.

I think I remember coming up with 4 "takes", some variants of others - and I may have missed some, I wasn't really trying.

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otherunicorn In reply to tommyk66 [2009-10-16 04:57:55 +0000 UTC]

The blank page has the lines and page number already there, with some guidelines as well. Those get turned off after it's laid out.

-Thomas's second take on life as Sonya (The obvious one)
-The two versions of Sonya from the families perspective
-Take two people and make one from them.
-Take two shattered families and make one from them
-Take to gender confused individuals and make a couple.

Less so:
-Anne's second take on life
-Teri's second take on life

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tommyk66 In reply to otherunicorn [2009-10-29 03:33:56 +0000 UTC]

OK, as a function of your posting the codicil I've gone back and re-read the story. It was good when I read it as it appeared; all in one sitting, front to back, it is one gut-kicking INCREDIBLE work.

As Sonya is the only 'survivor' of Thomas' family, I can't buy your "two shattered families" above; how about: "Take two who lost their sisters - and bring their sisters back".

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otherunicorn In reply to tommyk66 [2009-10-29 04:19:12 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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TGTony [2009-10-14 23:20:55 +0000 UTC]

here we go again !

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otherunicorn In reply to TGTony [2009-10-15 05:06:43 +0000 UTC]

haven't heard form you in a while!

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TGTony In reply to otherunicorn [2009-10-15 17:06:18 +0000 UTC]

yup.

I've uploaded some new stuff lately

you may enjoy some of it.

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Ganguro666 [2009-10-14 22:26:52 +0000 UTC]

Hit her with the cain! Aim for the face!

It's good to see some Take Two again.

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otherunicorn In reply to Ganguro666 [2009-10-15 05:07:34 +0000 UTC]

I think saying "boo" would be more than enough to get Yuki to embarrass herself, going on the way she is cringing here....

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Ganguro666 In reply to otherunicorn [2009-10-15 22:09:13 +0000 UTC]

I still think she deserves some additional abuse. I am feeling a bit cynical today though..

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Peken [2009-10-14 19:20:54 +0000 UTC]

Mmmm, some school dresses again

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otherunicorn In reply to Peken [2009-10-14 21:16:31 +0000 UTC]

Yes, and at my school, they really were that short - or shorter!

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RanmaKusanagi [2009-10-14 14:44:55 +0000 UTC]

And then another 20-100 more

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Vueiy-Visarelli In reply to RanmaKusanagi [2009-10-14 15:20:51 +0000 UTC]

lol, yeah.

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Ean-Sze [2009-10-14 13:11:15 +0000 UTC]

had almost forgotten this comic

yes just 2-3 more is all needed

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