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Published: 2009-06-06 20:09:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 12365; Favourites: 190; Downloads: 107
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Continuation from the last set!Silly flashback included.
P.S. I got good feedback on the first set, the primary criticism being that I can't keep the camera away from Jekyll's face for a damn second--which is true--but this (and about two other sets of boards.... 'twas busy this week) was done before I got those comments--so please don't think I'm ignoring them!!
I think when I'm done with this segment I will go and revise the old ones to have better staging. But I will NOT do it now or else I'll get stuck in the vortex of redrawing and redrawing and redrawing, which ALWAYS HAPPENS. Especially when it comes to sequential art. Some of you *coughViccycough* can attest to this fact.
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please don't kill me for that stupid joke
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that would be creepy to wake up with blood of some one else on your hands
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I like your version of Jekyll and Hyde. It's awesome.
These storyboards look really good. So good that you could do the entire story without dialogue.
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i really like the facial expressions. you do really good with sorrowed,pained,and scared faces.
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Very strong!! I like the moment when the flashback switches back, and he lifts his hand. Also, such simple but great use of red!
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Can I have your permission to make a traditional animation based..I mean using this story board? I will credit you for character design, story, and story board. And Ill send you a link when the animation is ready. If you like the idea and you got any other story board that you think it could be animated, please tell me.
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Goodness, that would be quite an honor. :3 Might I ask what this animation will be used for?
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just for practice. And to put it in metacafe, you tube and tutv--. No commercial use of it. And all design and adapted storyline based in another material credits will be for you. So lets say that Im doing this because I like it. 
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please make an animated movie or a comic or continue this... is simply amazing
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Oh! One other thing that just hit me that you might want to consider!
In the first panel, you've got him kinda holding his head with his left hand, but then after the hallucination/memory thingy, he winces and voila! Blood is on there where is wasn't moments ago when he was touching his face. 
Just thought I'd throw that out there.
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Ohhh WOW! That is AMAZING! And I love Hyde reflected in the glasses... Whoa.
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*is filled with MUCH fangirl love*
Ohmaigawd! This is filled with a ridiculous amount of win! I can't WAIT to see it as an animation! It shall be fantastical!
I particularly love the way it zooms in on the glasses, and then, as soon as it shoots back to Jekyll, it's almost like *HE'S* the one feeling the very final blow that was delivered. Like, a sympathy wince. Very, VERY nice touch.
One nit-picky note, tho; on the panels when he lifts his hand up to revel the blood there, I notice some got onto the collar of his shirt the first two times he sees it, but it wasn't there in the very last panel. Just thought I'd point it out.
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Thanks for your enthusiasm! 8D
My original intention was more of Jekyll wincing out of seeing his (Hyde's) reflection in the guy's glasses.... Lol, I realize he ought to have more concern for human life, but somehow with London society and all I see him more frightened by the IMAGE of himself as a murderer than by the actual murder.
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Haaaaa~!
I can totally see that. COMPLETELY.
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D'AWW, Jekyll...! I love the Hyde-in-the-spectacles.
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The Hyde reflected in the glasses makes me squeal like a stupid little fangirl. IT LOOKS SO COOL.
And you're really good at drawing beat-up people. I'm not. D: Action stories make my head spin because I CANNOT DRAW ACTION OR THE AFTERMATH.
Jekyl's face in the lower panel is kinda cute. Am I weird for thinking that? D:
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oh wow I really like that transaction it's really kool!
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Interesting tests, friend. Please continue this, I love that you chose the Jekyll/Hyde theme. Sp. how you treat it.
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8C POOR JEKYLL and yet these storyboards make me so effortlessly happy. I would really really like to see more. To be completely honest, I actually like the face-shots of Henry. Lets ya see his expression, makes you feel like he's alone.
At least, that's how it works for me. 8D;
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I absolutely adore the hallucination part. And then the blood on his hands! Wow.
The wibbly-stagger thing to the bed amuses me. Poor guy.
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He goes *KA-FLUMP*
What a dork. XP
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Wow, again this is really gripping. The red on his hand is quite effective in showing how much guilt he feels at what Hyde did.
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Once again, poor guy
And AMAZING sketches and emotions!
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