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Description “So (y/n)”, Edward said. You turned to the blond boy. “I recall you saying you would tell us why you don’t need a transmutation circle to perform alchemy.”
You felt the slightest bit worried. The memory of saying you would tell them about your past lingered in your mind.
“Well…” you trailed off. “It’s a long story.”
Edward crossed his auto-mail leg over his right leg (and damn did he look sexy), resting his head on his hand.
“We have the time to listen.” He said, his golden eyes sparkling with interest.
You told the Elric Brothers everything. About your friend, the Truth-practically everything. The boys had seemed to be slightly surprised.
“I’ve always felt as though I was the only person guilty of committing the taboo,” you finished thoughtfully. “I’ve never heard of someone else who also attempted human transmutation.”
Edward glanced at his brother. The golden-eyed alchemist looked almost…nervous and worried. The younger brother nodded to his elder sibling.
Edward looked at you, a serious expression planted on his face. He let out a small sigh.
“You’re not the only one,” he replied, never taking his eyes off of you.
It was now Ed and Al’s turn to tell you their story. Complete and utter shock flowed through your body as they told you about their past. Edward was right-you weren’t the only one.
“And so,” Edward finished, “That’s our little experience. You are not the only one.”
A few bitter tears fell down your face. “I’m not…” you trailed off, sniffling. “I’m not the only fool…”
You gave the two young boys a delicate grin. Alphonse gave you a friendly nod, while his brother flashed you one of his priceless grin.
Leaning against the window, you watched the afternoon landscape pass by. The pastures were painted a beautiful green, and small homes were dotted here and there.
Pulling out your book that you had started earlier, you decided to read. Edward had already seemed to drift into sleep. The boy took up most of the seat, forcing you to sit very close to the window. He looked so peaceful and adorable while he was sleeping, blond hair flowing in front of his face. You couldn’t help but grin in the slightest.
“Hey (y/n)?” Al asked. You turned your attention to the younger brother. “Yeah?” you replied, placing the bookmark where you left off reading.
“Do you like Brother?”
You paused. What kind of question was that? “Yes, of course,” you replied blushing slightly. “As a great friend of mine.”
Now it was Al’s turn to pause. “No…I mean…are you in love with Brother?” (shit just went down)
Your eyes widened in surprise and nervousness, as your face became beet red.
“N-n-n-n-no!” you stammered. “I mean”- you paused to cough as convincingly as possible-“Where did you get that idea, Al?”
Alphonse narrowed his red slits. You imagined that, if you could actually see his face, there would be a small grin planted on it.
“I just assumed,” he replied in a mocking tone. “Since you always seem to blush around him and he’s one of the only people you really open up to. Not to mention you always try to be around him”-
“OKAY, ALPHONSE!” you almost yelled, followed by a long sigh. “We get it.” You paused. “I-i-i-it’s not that obvious, is it?”
Al started to giggle. You kinda wanted to hit him with a chair (even though he wouldn’t really feel anything).
“Well,” the armored boy replied, his giggles dying down. “It is to me and to a couple other people, but not to Brother…”
You glanced down at Edward’s sleeping form. His hands were under his head as he faced his younger brother, as his chest rose and fell slowly. Undeniably, he was adorable. After flashing a faint smile at the young State Alchemist, you looked back up at Alphonse.
“Other people?” you asked demandingly. “What OTHER people?” Part of you didn’t want to hear the answer to that question.
“I don’t know,” Al replied, aware of your anxiousness. “Maybe…” He hesitated, almost as though he was thinking of your reaction. “The Colonel?”
You froze. No wonder he seemed hesitant. “The…Colonel?” you asked, your voice barely above a whisper. The younger brother hesitated again before nodding slowly.
“BWAHH!” you practically screamed, but not loud enough for the whole train to hear. “That damn Colonel! He thinks he can see right through me, huh? I’ll show him! But wait, what if he tells someone else?! Ah, then I’ll tear away at him piece by piece by using a pitchfork, starting with his di”-
“(y/n)!” Al almost yelled. You had forgotten he was there. “No.”
Forming your face in a pout, you slouched in your seat. “I’m just worried is all,” you explained with embarrassment. “I really have my doubts about that guy.”
Alphonse started laughing again. “I won’t tell anyone,” he said sweetly in that childish voice of his. “I promise.”
After blinking a few times, you sat up, flashing the younger brother a grin.
“Alright,” you said. “I trust you.”

After about three hours, you and the Elric brothers stopped about halfway to Rush Valley to relax and get some food.
So there you were, sitting next to Edward, eating chicken noodle soup and a roll. Edward had gotten chicken noodle soup, too.
“So Edward,” you began, swallowing some of your tasty roll. Edward took a spoonful of soup and swallowed it before turning his attention to you.
“Why do you need repairs?” You glanced at his arm. “It looks fine to me.”
Edward clenched his auto-mail hand into a fist before releasing it. He was no longer looking at you, but rather at his feet.
“I felt as though the arm was dislocated,” he replied steadily. “Like it shifted when I made sharp movements.”
You nodded, not really knowing what else to say.
No, I mean…do you love Brother?
Al’s words kept repeating in your mind. Ever since he said that, you were hesitant around Edward.
Of course, Edward didn’t know this, so you tried to act natural.
“I’m so bored,” you complained. “When are we getting on the train?”
Alphonse looked up at you. “We’ll be taking the last train heading to Rush Valley today,” he said. “We have to be there by 9:45.”
“9:45?!” you exclaimed, jumping up. “What will we do for the next eight hours?”
“I don’t know.”
“But—“ You cut yourself off. Eight hours. And Alphonse was the one who bought the tickets.
Well, shit.
That bastard! you thought. He’s trying to set me up with Ed! I’ll kill him!!
“Well,” Alphonse said, interrupting your thoughts, He stood up. “I’m gonna have to go and pick some stuff up. I’ll see you guys later!”
And before you knew it, it was just you and Edward sitting in the café.
Crap! You thought. What do I do?!?!?!?!
“Hey (y/n),” Edward acknowledged you. You turned to him, but he was not making eye contact with you. “Don’t you think Al was acting a little weird…?”
You paused. “Y-yeah.” You replied nervously.
“W-well,” Edward began. “Maybe we should just…hang out until Alphonse gets back.”
You felt your cheeks heat up.
You gulped, your cheeks becoming increasingly red.
“S-sure.”
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Comments: 152

powerbeazx [2019-10-09 21:25:39 +0000 UTC]

WHERE IS THE PART 6??? I NEED TO KNOW

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Sulfurea [2018-04-15 13:25:32 +0000 UTC]

I loved this. Please, I know it's 4 years later and maybe you're working on other FanFictions but PLEASE, PLEASE write the next chapter. I can't wait to know how it ends!!! I'm BEGGING you here, PLEASE continue!!! I hope I won't die of impatience and, meanwhile thank you for this!!!
*Insane Laugh* 'Seriously, I don't know why I'm laughing right now'
BYE!!!!!!

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MindHoney2Fetish [2017-10-16 21:57:27 +0000 UTC]

..... *updates list* 

Hit List-
Roy (for nearly dying on me, the lil shit)
ALPHONSE (THIS GODDAMN SITUATION.....I will crush your blood seal with only ONE tear!)
ROY AGAIN

What I need to kill them-
PITCHFORKS AND TORCHES

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Darkrouge101 [2017-05-17 01:45:28 +0000 UTC]

Darn Al, WHY MUST YOU DO THIS TO MA!!!! 

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IcygemGamingArts [2017-04-06 00:00:58 +0000 UTC]

NEXT ONE PLZ

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american-otaku-girl [2016-11-30 06:28:06 +0000 UTC]

Me: ALPHONSE! Just for that I'll make YOU tear the Colonel away piece by piece with a pitchfork, starting with- 
Al: You'll thank me later

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angelinanarayan [2016-11-01 09:07:11 +0000 UTC]

MOREEEEEE

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ianitelover1 [2016-09-26 01:00:23 +0000 UTC]

WHY YOU NO UPDATE?! PLZ UPDATE!


Unless this is the finale.... if thats the case sorry.....

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AnimexFanFiction [2016-08-21 05:09:31 +0000 UTC]

*is swooning, fangirling, pokerface-ing because of mom and dad in the same room with me, and yeah dies*

Me: Aaand yeah, MORE PLEASE

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american-otaku-girl In reply to AnimexFanFiction [2016-11-30 06:28:48 +0000 UTC]

Its so hard to pokerface when you feel like you're gonna explode XD

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Star-la [2016-07-29 14:55:26 +0000 UTC]

Ed: "we do have time to listen" who else imagined him saying that so sassyly? (I know that's not a word XD)

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avatarreiko [2016-07-27 05:15:25 +0000 UTC]

Why a pitchfork?

More!

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Janerox [2016-06-22 17:51:51 +0000 UTC]

Update PLEASEEEEEE!

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Midnightisfluffy [2016-05-07 21:38:11 +0000 UTC]

Write another chapter, oh please! This is so cute!!!

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TheEmeraldOfVenus [2016-04-22 02:14:27 +0000 UTC]

Update PLEASE!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE it!!"

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enhancerxx [2016-03-13 22:08:06 +0000 UTC]

Dying! Update please! ;w;

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Jazellia [2016-02-19 07:41:55 +0000 UTC]

I died.

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puga-ice-chan [2016-02-15 13:13:15 +0000 UTC]

update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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OtakuForteLife [2015-11-30 07:09:07 +0000 UTC]

plEASSSSEEEE UPDATE
Its been soooo long! Thank you c:

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ShikaraNara [2015-11-11 22:42:14 +0000 UTC]

first of all: KYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAA this is so sweet *3* when will you continue? >w<
and second: I love you A/Ns  xD *whispers* tell me next time you're planning on stealing the Tardis, I'll help ;3

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fangirl224 [2015-11-01 21:06:25 +0000 UTC]

III NNNEEEDDD MORE FLLUFFFF

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Gabim617 [2015-10-26 02:25:39 +0000 UTC]

DAMMIT ALPHONSE-SENPAI!!!!!!!!

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HungryPotatoRaptor [2015-10-21 04:04:26 +0000 UTC]

GIVE ME MOOOOOORE!!! (Damn Alphonse.... I still love you senpai...)

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Pomera-CP [2015-08-28 00:43:12 +0000 UTC]

dammit aLPHONSE

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Discardia2 [2015-08-24 06:36:51 +0000 UTC]

Damn you, Al! DAMN YOU!

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Drew911d [2015-08-21 04:04:07 +0000 UTC]

Omg, so bootiful \ouo/ I need             

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MerryWorld [2015-07-29 21:28:32 +0000 UTC]

"Starting with his di-" I lol-ed. Great story! I fangirled all over the place

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Mycat528 [2015-07-09 15:57:46 +0000 UTC]

lol im just staring at the screen intently scrolling down and sipping on my iced mocha

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Ticcidestiny234 [2015-05-29 05:32:52 +0000 UTC]

Neeeeeeeeeed more  

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Mycat528 In reply to Ticcidestiny234 [2015-07-09 15:57:13 +0000 UTC]

you commented that on my birthday

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Ticcidestiny234 In reply to Mycat528 [2015-07-09 15:59:34 +0000 UTC]

Oh we'll uhhhhh












HAPPY LATE BRITHDAY!!!!!!  

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Mycat528 In reply to Ticcidestiny234 [2015-07-09 16:29:12 +0000 UTC]

lol thx

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SakuraStar10311 In reply to Ticcidestiny234 [2015-06-28 16:00:38 +0000 UTC]

Agh i didnt mean to reply to you just meant to post a comment .-. The phone app is confusing >< sorrryyyy

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Ticcidestiny234 In reply to SakuraStar10311 [2015-06-28 19:47:21 +0000 UTC]

Me: oh sorry 

destiny: sorry for her annoying ness 

me: help writer-chan my other self is being mean too meeeee

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SakuraStar10311 In reply to Ticcidestiny234 [2015-06-28 15:59:38 +0000 UTC]

Please continue!!!! >o< T-T

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Ticcidestiny234 In reply to SakuraStar10311 [2015-06-28 19:47:30 +0000 UTC]

Ok?

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InSaNe-DrAwInGs [2015-05-10 16:58:56 +0000 UTC]

MY GWAD PLS SEND ME A LINK 4 MORE PLSSSSSSS

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Xx-HiddenGem-xX [2015-04-19 08:37:22 +0000 UTC]

Oh my gosh I love this story so much!!! I know it's been a while since you updated... (I couldn't help but notice you posted this on April 28th...and April 28th just so happens to be my birthday!! XD ahhh that totally made my night!! ) but could you pretty PRETTY please finish the story?!

I can't believe I'm stooping to this...and i hope you don't find this annoying because I'm not trying to be DX but...i would even be willing to draw you anything you would like in return for finishing this story, seriously!! I'm totally willing too!! We'll call it an equivalent exchange yes??? (I'm not sure if you would like my art style or not but let me know what you think! )

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catlover12348 [2015-04-14 18:48:16 +0000 UTC]

Must. . . have more!!! This is so cute!!! Kawii!!     I cannot wait for the next one!!

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Cheesecake-Superstar [2015-04-08 02:50:37 +0000 UTC]

*sits down and patiently waits for the possibility of a new chapter...

...While her inner fangirl has a freakout from waiting so much as five seconds*

I seriously adore this fic

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missred-missused [2015-04-06 17:56:34 +0000 UTC]

Yup, I love you. Just thought you should know. Please make more chapters! I'm dying to read more!  

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Amberlixcious [2015-04-05 18:45:54 +0000 UTC]

More PLEASE T^T

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IcelandicSnowcone [2015-04-03 18:03:16 +0000 UTC]

I'm excited for more, when will it come out?

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theotakugurl [2015-03-26 21:03:29 +0000 UTC]

MORE!!!!!!

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SakuraStar10311 [2015-03-07 05:52:22 +0000 UTC]

PLZ  PLZ PLZZZZ UPDATE I NEEDS TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS EEEEEEK!!!!

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Alpha-Wolf-Ace [2015-03-06 21:34:38 +0000 UTC]

MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

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Kyokotoshino [2015-03-04 22:17:52 +0000 UTC]

More

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DeraFire [2015-02-24 15:30:44 +0000 UTC]

MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!

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liz-drowned [2015-01-25 17:24:10 +0000 UTC]

Please update   

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SnKFangirl8936 [2015-01-19 08:42:24 +0000 UTC]

More please!   

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