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kelalea [2005-09-26 06:15:52 +0000 UTC]

I really like this. I am also a fan of simplicity... I also like complexity... But not much in between...

Seriously though... this is a great piece. I won't get all technical on you and spiel out all the buzzwords that I'm so used to hearing... but you've got a nice composition here. I would maybe crop down some of the white space at the top and at the right side... mostly on the top... Right now it's a little bit too open and it's kind of distracting from the main forms. It would help to activate the space better if there weren't so much of it there that wasn't doing anything. It would be much more dynamic if it was a little more closely cropped. Ahh and here I was promising I wasn't going to ramble. I lied. I'm sorry. At least I caught myself before I got too far...

I look forward to seeing what else you come up with.

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renimiera [2005-09-26 04:24:16 +0000 UTC]

really? i will wait for that

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renimiera [2005-09-26 03:32:49 +0000 UTC]

wow, amazing. i like u

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