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Oxdarock — Stablizing Experiment Pg 1

Published: 2012-11-02 21:00:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 230689; Favourites: 2212; Downloads: 1261
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A continuation of this picture , we find our scientist, Lessien, trying to reverse the effects of her previous experiment. However, things don't always go as planned....

The first page of four! Enjoy

Next page can be found here:
Stablizing Experiment Pg 2

Lessien is © of .
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Comments: 14

mysteryguy9215 [2013-07-31 23:28:46 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


Not bad. Its a nice compliment to the original image, and it is well drawn also. The dialogue, while simple, is effective, and her reaction is perfect. I can't say that a scientific potion or serum is anything new, but in this case, it is well executed and is original enough, being an "evening out" serum, with the results being true, but not what she wanted in the first place. Also, very well drawn. I'm not sure what program you use, if this is hand drawn or computer sketched or whatever. Nonetheless, it looks very nice and is well detailed, from the dampening of the shirt to its ripping. Even the minor things, like the sound effects (RRRMMMM) and the motion lines around her body are also a subtle but very nice touch. Overall, well done!

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Oxdarock In reply to mysteryguy9215 [2013-08-01 00:03:53 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much for the critique! I'm definitely trying to improve my comic making these days (before that I have to work up the nerve to actually start one, lol).

The program I used at the time for this was Manga Studio EX 4 combined with Photoshop, but now I completely use Manga Studio EX 5 for everything. It's awesome!!!

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mysteryguy9215 In reply to Oxdarock [2013-08-01 05:11:22 +0000 UTC]

Very nice! Its just a shame I'm not big on GTS, I would have enjoyed ALL aspects of it. In all seriousness, its an impressive little comic. I'll have to check out some of your other stuff as well.

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LeSlash [2014-11-17 18:07:31 +0000 UTC]

and where is next page? you did so much work I donno how to find it xD

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Oxdarock In reply to LeSlash [2014-11-17 18:53:38 +0000 UTC]

......Ok, time to set up some links.

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ReadyArt [2014-10-24 19:04:00 +0000 UTC]

What a great sequence!!! Masterful!!!

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LATEXDOLLanimago [2013-08-18 04:11:35 +0000 UTC]

O-M-G, its...BAMBI BLAZE<3 <3

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kacript [2013-04-08 22:45:41 +0000 UTC]

Well she did say even out her boob proportions, she never said shrink them.

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SHrrrrrriiipfan [2013-02-25 21:40:29 +0000 UTC]

That's what I'm talking about, right there!

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SheikTheGeek [2012-11-27 06:56:54 +0000 UTC]

Nice comic!

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Dragonkingmark [2012-11-03 02:20:28 +0000 UTC]

this wont end well...

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Zanapi-1709 [2012-11-03 02:01:57 +0000 UTC]

yes, this again!

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elek-tronikz [2012-11-02 21:04:46 +0000 UTC]

When has science ever gone correctly?

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DAVE37 [2012-11-02 21:01:42 +0000 UTC]

Boobzilla

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