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Oyee — Seth and Traqq p02
Published: 2011-10-01 20:13:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 1358; Favourites: 12; Downloads: 0
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EDIT 13-08-02>>> Since I'm planning to post this comic somewhere else too, I've redrawn this page based on the old one, to match with fresher pages. The only page I'm redrwaing besides this will be page two, because the BG is really ugly there too. Rest from pages 3 to 5 will only get their speech bubbles adjusted to be more readable.
Old page can be found here >> oyee.deviantart.com/art/old-Se… <<
side note - it might take some time until the old page is refreshed with the redone
Completely experimental stuff. Just seeing if I can pull of something like this. Figured I'd post the page a bit bigger so I can spare some space with text size and still make it somewhat readable. But tell me if it's too small.
oyee.deviantart.com/art/Diarie… << Main cover and Navigation
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Comments: 3
I really like the expressions, they're really... expressive
But um, panel four, Traqq's eyes look a bit unfocused. It might just be me, though. It was certainly funny for a split second. But everything else is spot on!
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Well, thanks for the compliments.
Do you mean unfocused as he isn't looking in the same general direction (like being all herpy-derpy ) or as it's not quite defined where he is looking exactly(missing pupils)?
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A bit herpy-derpy. It's just the angle or something, because at a first fleeting glance it looks like his right eye is looking in the opposite direcion of his left one. But then you do a double-take and look at it properly and then it is fine. It's not really a problem, I don't think. Just a bit funny.
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