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Published: 2018-06-15 19:26:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 11005; Favourites: 102; Downloads: 0
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[The Beginning]-(Remastered)
Look how far we've come! [Original]
Gaster's design is more specific, the faces are fixed, and I fixed that FREAKING lamp! Overall better. ^ ^
Since part one of TSWFBY is complete, I figured I'd remaster pages 1-3. They are relatively short, and first impressions are important (since they were by far the roughest)! I don't plan on redoing more than 1-3 though. I want to keep moving forward! : )
I'll be working on page 19 now as well, so no worries!
This comic will center around the six dorks who fell before Frisk. There will be spoilers, and there will be children dying. If you are sensitive to child death, thoughts of suicide, cutting, guns, knives, etc, please be careful on deciding to read this comic or not. For these reasons, and possibly more, some of the pages will have a mature rating.
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Undertale (c) Toby Fox
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Comments: 38
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perfect.
we need a draw your squad picture of the kids position right now.
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I'm not sure if you saw the potato faces from the original,
but you might need to reconsider your career as a critic ; )
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Haha, I figured : )
Thank you so much! ^ ^
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You have improved
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I'll be sure to work hard on it! : )
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WOW!!
such improvement!!
you worked so hard !! Good job!!
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Thank you!
I shall continue to do my best!
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Do your best !!
i hope you dont mind me asking this but , what you method , or advice on , improving one's art skills?
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YouTube tutorials and practice/ experimentation. : )
Also- comics are pretty difficult- but they're great for drawing stuff over and over again. You figure out what you like, what you don't like and try to improve stuff you struggle with. I try to draw as often as I can to be consistent- even when I don't feel like it. Still take breaks tho. Try to draw something you enjoy so you're more likely to stick with it.
I also doodle in some of the classes that don't require too much focus- but I can't exactly recommend that to everyone, haha! ^ ^
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we have the new and improved, CHILD PILE
look at where we are, look at where we started~
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We've come so far!
(we've only just got out of the ruins on page 18)
But we've come so far!!!! : D
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Haha, I'm glad you're enjoying the pile!
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Thank you! I'm excited to draw more! ^ ^
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This looks so much better! Great job! Love the improvements!
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I'm glad! I think so too! ^ ^
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Now I just need to work on hands... CURSE YOU HANDS!
I'm glad to have improved this far! ^ ^
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DRAWING HANDS IS THE BANE OF MY EXISTENCE
Whoohoo!
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Oh wow! I does look a lot better! You've really improved! Great job! ^u^
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Thank you so much!
I will continue to grow as much as I can! ^ ^
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//Yooooo the lighting in the last panel is awesome!
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It's not as cramped as before too!
I'm glad you like it! ^ ^
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Then you will start from scratch with the comic or what?
And sorry for my bad english... Again
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No, I'm just remastering pages 1-3.
I will continue with page 19 next. Then I will remaster page 2.
I am not re-doing everything. That would take waaaaay too long, haha. ^ ^
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