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Published: 2014-09-25 02:02:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 394; Favourites: 10; Downloads: 0
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Loud music + Dark room + Glowsticks= A happy Tabbyolder watchers should know this by now XD
art/tabby- GLITT3RN3KO
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So many critiques. ;-; Sorry if I'm late, I've been busy these past few days!
This is cute! Classic rave party with a dark room + glowsticks! The glow and color is great! Really gives you that "rave party" feel!
I would suggest to add even more shading! Overall shading where it would be really dark, such as: under the neck, under the armpits, and possible right under the waist too! After that, You already have the darkness around you, maybe put more of an indication of the highlights from the glowsticks on her clothes. If it's a really dark room, and the glowsticks are the only light, then it should show a bit on the face, shirt and pants!
Hope this helped! ^^
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that's fine :3 I appreciate you doing this
thank you, I was pretty unsure with the shading in this. im really happy you covered that!
I will make sure of this next time I draw something like this!
thank you for the help <3
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ahh this looks so awesome ;v; Like there is so much improvement just in this picture alone idek
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ah~ yay ;u; im so glad to hear that
and thanks <33
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Now ten seconds of jazz to smooth things out.......... That should bout do it!
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