mastermindg [2003-03-17 04:29:18 +0000 UTC]

hahah! splendid!

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ldemosthenes [2003-01-12 23:38:28 +0000 UTC]

that's great, lol. the angsty suicidal poetry get's borin after a while. lux-aeterna said it: "Seeing a Clavi v. Banjo Weird Poetry Battle would make my week." too true

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ubetyourboots [2003-01-12 21:48:47 +0000 UTC]

Ah yes, one of the most powerful weapons against depression and angst in poetry:

aggressive trash talking in verse against the subject of another's:
"The banjo irons yo clavi's ass."

This is very amusing--you just lightened up my day, poetically speaking. Just know that I got your back when it comes to these anti-angst spazzings. As for the poem itself, the style, rhythm, flow, and rhyme are all superb.

Great work! Ube.

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necromanzer [2003-01-12 21:32:56 +0000 UTC]

^henrique said it
very nice favving it

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yachtclub [2003-01-12 21:31:44 +0000 UTC]

Haha, just great. Nice works. Keep em flowin.

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-henrique- [2003-01-12 14:33:52 +0000 UTC]

fun little beat to it, enjoyable little poem

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keen [2003-01-11 13:59:00 +0000 UTC]

yeah, some asses need a'ironin' from time to time

nice one pach.

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skabenya [2003-01-11 07:03:31 +0000 UTC]

this is cool... I like never read poems but this was a good one... it sounds really neat.

when I hear it I picture a guy playing with a band and like singing the blues to that or something like that, it's a really great theme, cool work.

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tenaciousart [2003-01-10 18:43:48 +0000 UTC]

but DD? that's sad that the pickers won't look around too far...

oh well what the hell.

nice work, very humorous indeed... too short tho.

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2mo [2003-01-10 15:01:42 +0000 UTC]

omg
!!
nice dude, I remember you writing this before and I loved it back then.

congrats on the DD!

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who1981 [2003-01-10 12:50:38 +0000 UTC]

Clavi or Clavichord
Pronunciation: 'kla-v&-"kord [link]
Etymology: Medieval Latin clavichordium, from Latin clavis key + chorda string
Date: 15th century
An early keyboard instrument having strings struck by tangents attached directly to the key ends


Ya, Clavi = Old School

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mp3d [2003-01-10 11:58:32 +0000 UTC]

"The banjo irons yo clavi's ass" - LMFAO hehehehehahahahahohohohhihihihihhuhuhu...

but guitar owns them all. especially my guitar, sexy thing. i'd marry it if i were only 18... hehe

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lux-aeterna [2003-01-10 05:25:27 +0000 UTC]

Heh, I like it. Seeing a Clavi v. Banjo Weird Poetry Battle would make my weelk.

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bun-knee [2003-01-10 05:22:29 +0000 UTC]

Nice bro, nice beat to it.

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jsenn [2002-01-15 05:07:58 +0000 UTC]

Too much fun, this and that. I am certainly not depressed, not now. When your clavi gets tickled, you gotta laugh!

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blondeoverblue [2001-10-08 03:45:05 +0000 UTC]

haha *lmfao* very funnee, yes uplifting... confusing but interesting



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oddlyaromatic [2001-09-12 23:27:54 +0000 UTC]

Wellwellwellity Simon...


It's just occured to me that a reply is in order. Oh yes indeedy...

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