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Description On The Way Home
I Met A Friend
An Empty Burger Box
That Was Caught In The Wind
It Reminded Me
Of A Lost Puppy
Dancing Between My Legs
Going Ahead
Then Waiting For Me To Catch Up
At The Time
It Was Annoying
I Stepped On It
A Few Steps Ahead
Something Was Missing
A Friend
I Looked Behind
To See My Friend
Had Lost Its Rythem
I Shed A Tear
When It Was Still
In The Distance
Dead
A Part Of Me Died Today
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Pagel - Day 10
Comments: 36

millieblobs [2005-01-14 23:14:57 +0000 UTC]

lol Thats really great! Your a legend

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Pagel In reply to millieblobs [2005-01-15 09:56:46 +0000 UTC]

thank you.............your right...i am arent i?

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millieblobs In reply to Pagel [2005-01-15 21:20:46 +0000 UTC]

I bow down to your greatness *bows down*

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Pagel In reply to millieblobs [2005-01-15 22:39:53 +0000 UTC]

chins up,

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violetfury [2005-01-14 19:25:20 +0000 UTC]

it really is the small things, isn't it? sometimes an experience like that can be so profound, can inspire you to attribute soul-like qualities to objects. but who says they don't have souls?

"Things have a life of their own; it's just a matter of waking up their souls."
--Melquiades, fm. ONE HUNDRED YEARS OF SOLITUDE

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Pagel In reply to violetfury [2005-01-15 09:57:30 +0000 UTC]

that is the most fantastic quote i have ever read!!!! i'll never look at ANYTHING the same again....

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dismantled-heart6 [2005-01-14 11:29:09 +0000 UTC]

sorry doenst touch me think its weird and very hrmmm not i dunno how 2 say just didnt think it was good

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dulcetblossom [2005-01-14 00:28:09 +0000 UTC]

That was really choppy, and its inspiration was obvious; actually, completely duplicated. This lacks originality, meter, punctuation, and lower case letters. Just some things to think about Until then, i agree with *futilitarian .

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fyoot [2005-01-13 20:47:18 +0000 UTC]

Tell me this is all some horrible joke.

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PerfectionistApathy In reply to fyoot [2005-01-14 07:34:14 +0000 UTC]

If only.

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runnawayspirit [2005-01-13 19:50:48 +0000 UTC]

wow I had tears

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Pagel In reply to runnawayspirit [2005-01-14 12:49:09 +0000 UTC]

wow complemented!, danke

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SelflessDefect [2005-01-13 16:03:27 +0000 UTC]

this is really good

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Pagel In reply to SelflessDefect [2005-01-13 16:34:12 +0000 UTC]

thanks!! and for fave!

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SelflessDefect In reply to Pagel [2005-01-13 18:07:57 +0000 UTC]

welcome

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jadedee [2005-01-13 10:07:45 +0000 UTC]

i can see the box
i've done things like that, you only become attached to them after they have gone, and then you feel like the crewlest thing in the world...


very good

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Pagel In reply to jadedee [2005-01-13 16:34:56 +0000 UTC]

oh god no one has pointed that out, i remember feeling so cruel now , thanks lol

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Asteroid [2005-01-10 14:10:54 +0000 UTC]

Really good. Actually makes me reflect a little on life. Most poems I've seen where I am from are very suicidal and violent, or lame and stupid. But this was very good. It wasn't lame at all

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Pagel In reply to Asteroid [2005-01-10 15:12:28 +0000 UTC]

thanks a lot!, i thought i was the only one

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LonelyLife [2005-01-10 06:04:06 +0000 UTC]

ahahahahahahahaha you poor thing

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Pagel In reply to LonelyLife [2005-01-10 11:47:33 +0000 UTC]

i'm over it now

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toseekisnot2find [2005-01-09 10:37:42 +0000 UTC]

i love how anyone can read this and automatically understand how you felt.
you don't know me and i don't know you, but this is still a fav.

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Pagel In reply to toseekisnot2find [2005-01-09 18:13:16 +0000 UTC]

oh god thanks so much! thanks for fave!!

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9thLegion [2005-01-09 03:37:32 +0000 UTC]

Funnily enough, I know exactly what you mean in this. I've had this, not in exactly the same form but i've had this, its, weakening.

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Pagel In reply to 9thLegion [2005-01-09 10:26:23 +0000 UTC]

i know! and u think this is stupid! but then cry haha ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, danke for fave

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max-ambrose [2005-01-08 20:36:11 +0000 UTC]

lovin the simplness. thats great. top stuff.
can understand it as well, goes a notch up there.

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peotry [2005-01-08 11:02:16 +0000 UTC]

this is fantastic *fave*

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Simpledimple [2005-01-08 11:01:37 +0000 UTC]

holy shit

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Nalyr [2005-01-08 09:45:05 +0000 UTC]

that makes a lot of sense. this is incredible!

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Pagel In reply to Nalyr [2005-01-08 10:58:11 +0000 UTC]

danke

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nyuji-tora [2005-01-07 22:56:42 +0000 UTC]

*tear* Very nice... I think a part of me died with you.

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Pagel In reply to nyuji-tora [2005-01-07 23:23:28 +0000 UTC]

i swear i'm gonna go there tomorrow and take a picture of that poor box, oh god i just wanted to know what was inside, and the terrible thing was it didnt move at all after i crushed it, a little flicker in the wind i all i asked but NOTHING oh god

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nyuji-tora In reply to Pagel [2005-01-08 04:01:14 +0000 UTC]

You poor thing. Go and get your box, dear.

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Pagel In reply to nyuji-tora [2005-01-08 11:09:33 +0000 UTC]

hehe i will

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Ravenwild [2005-01-07 22:04:55 +0000 UTC]

A part of me went with you when I read this poem *sniff*

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Pagel In reply to Ravenwild [2005-01-07 23:21:01 +0000 UTC]

thanks, but it is a true story, therefor making it so much harder for me, i'm gonna go get that box tommorow if i can stil find it

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