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The footsteps, sure and steady, halted just inside her cell. She felt his shadow fall over her.For a long while there was nothing--only the constant drip of water over shallow breaths.
Then his voice, familiar, soft and dangerous like silk over a dagger.
"Welcome home. You'll find that very little has changed since you left. You might, of course, note Commander Laroe's absence. I'm certain you won't be mourning him, though--since you killed him."
Her tongue felt dry and heavy in her mouth. She swallowed, not sure she could have answered even if she'd wanted to.
He wasn't finished, though. "I wonder how disappointed you were. That you missed your true target."
Her hands, chained behind her back, were shaking. She clasped them together. Licked her cracked lips. "We all have regrets," she replied, her voice breaking despite her best efforts.
He crossed the room in a stride and hauled her roughly to her feet, spinning her to face him. Her chains rattled, his grip added more bruises to her arm. Her eyes were temporarily blinded from the torchlight behind him.
"You will tell me everything," he breathed, his green eyes seething with anger. "You'll have seven days to do so. And when that week is up, you die by executioner's blade." He shoved her back against the wall. "Until then, you will give me whatever I demand."
She closed her eyes as he pressed his lips to her neck.
"You were wrong," he added softly. "Flying is for birds. Even angels fall..."
woman from [link]
man from [link]
background by [link]
brushes by [link] and [link]
Above excerpt is mine (please don't steal!)
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Comments: 20
LolitaLoretta-4 [2009-12-17 21:27:47 +0000 UTC]
oh baby! this looks intense! what is it from?
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Pailei In reply to LolitaLoretta-4 [2009-12-17 21:48:40 +0000 UTC]
A story I've been writing for a while. You can find the first part here [link] (and links to the second and third chapters are in the author comments).
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LolitaLoretta-4 In reply to Pailei [2009-12-19 21:10:04 +0000 UTC]
=] i just emailed it to myself so i'll read it on my phone lol
hopefully it's juicy =]
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Pailei In reply to LolitaLoretta-4 [2009-12-20 07:10:51 +0000 UTC]
The third chapter is probably the one you'd like the best...although I did stop at the best part...
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LolitaLoretta-4 In reply to Pailei [2009-12-21 00:46:48 +0000 UTC]
YOU TEASE!
lol not gonna read it then
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Pailei In reply to LolitaLoretta-4 [2009-12-21 05:56:20 +0000 UTC]
Ah, but if you read it, like it, and pester me to write more...I actually might.
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LolitaLoretta-4 In reply to Pailei [2009-12-22 00:31:35 +0000 UTC]
lol maybe i'm sorry i just hate it when authors do that
especially the ones who do it INTENTIONALLY to get your hopes up
aka stupid Stephanie Meyer w/ Breaking Dawn
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Pailei In reply to LolitaLoretta-4 [2009-12-22 06:48:18 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, it wasn't intentional. I just got stuck, then moved on to other things, because I have Creative A.D.D.
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LolitaLoretta-4 In reply to Pailei [2009-12-23 01:16:41 +0000 UTC]
same here lol but i'm not good with my creativity!
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Pailei In reply to xyldrae [2008-09-28 22:20:14 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! Don't you just love finding the perfect background to accompany your idea?
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xyldrae In reply to Pailei [2008-09-29 01:15:35 +0000 UTC]
Yeah! Sometimes, it's the hardest part. when you begin with the main object. Most of my works start from the background. I love your literature bdw and figures of speech. Esp "like silk over a dagger".
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Pailei In reply to xyldrae [2008-09-29 01:27:48 +0000 UTC]
Ah, thank you so much. Most of my artwork illustrates parts or themes of stories I'm working on. I'm actually thinking of posting some more of my written work to this account...
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Pailei In reply to Avaith [2008-09-15 21:11:24 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much! Glad you like it.
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HiddenYume-stock [2008-09-08 00:44:35 +0000 UTC]
Oh wow.. great job with this.. the textures and shadows came out fantastic!
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Pailei In reply to HiddenYume-stock [2008-09-08 00:56:13 +0000 UTC]
Thanks so much! It's amazing stock galleries like yours that make my work possible!
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